11/21/07
http://www.fanfiction.net/~rrainyddaze
favorite fics: Lily/James, Draco/Hermione, Oliver Wood-centric, FredGeorge Weasley-centric, Marauder-centric, Luna-centric
pet peeves: abandoned fics, people who read but never review, people who post cliches/crap.
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The Trouble with Mistletoe by Crystallic Rain
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily decides to invite James along to one of Slughorn's Christmas parties, immediately deciding it was a huge mistake. Everything seems to go wrong, especially when Lily is caught off guard by the thing she hates most: mistletoe.
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Trouble with Mistletoe
cute. short sweet and beautifully written
A+
Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 20: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?
Really great story! :)
A Hogwarts Survival Guide by Pussycat123
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: During her fifth year, Lily Evans decides to write a guide to life at Hogwarts, and how to survive it. She covers all aspects of life, and gives helpful advice on how to deal with certain scenarios. For example, would you know what to do if you realised there was a kleptomaniac in your Dorm? What if you lost your beloved teddy bear, Mr Muffles? And do you know how to push, without any force? Read on, and find out the best way of living and surviving at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry ...
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Hogwarts Survival Guide
funny :)
Lily seems to be unpopular, though, from her tone towards dorm mates not liking her, etc. JKR said in an interview that Lily was quite popular, like Ginny...just something to consider :)
REALLY good job...i laughed out loud!
Author's Response: Well, yeah, though I wrote this before I officially heard that. I wanted her to sound cynical, so I made her very mistrustful and stuff, for the humour. It\'s not supposed to be agreat characterisation, just a bit of fun. Thanks for reviewing, anyway!
Last for the Sorting by anAnachronism
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A short character study on Blaise and the first year Sorting at Hogwarts from his point of view.
The Curse of Being a Slytherin by Roxy Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A short poem showing Draco Malfoy's point of view in Half-Blood Prince.
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: My life is not mine to live
i. love. it.
it is soo good!! (i know you probably know that already, since it won first place and all...)
oh my goodness its so..perfect! yay for you!
Escape by BlackClaude
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A ballad about my favorite conflicted hero and the lengths to which his loyalty drives him.
Second place entry in The Ballad Challenge
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Escape
very insightful about black's guilt..i really liked it!
I Understand by the_evenstar
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Emma Dobbs and Blaise Zabini have a beautiful relationship... he just doesn't know it yet.
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Understand
hey i liked this...a little weird, yes, but good writing and what's life if not a little weird? :)
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Understand
hey i liked this...a little weird, yes, but good writing and what's life if not a little weird? :)
Author's Response: Hehe, that\'s always been my motto. :P Thanks, too, for the review!
Unintended Desire of the Heart by laceymoibella
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: After Hermione runs into Draco in the corridor, she questions his demeanor. This leads to an unwanted close encounter between them. Hermione sets her sights on trying to figure out what Draco is hiding. Meanwhile, Draco is determined that she not discover what he is up to. Neither one is prepared for the consequences that ensue.
Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Another Side Of You
hey i really like it so far...draco isnt enough of a jerk though, lol :)
anyway, update soon, i love this!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am happy to hear that you like it so far.
I hope you check in after the holidays once the queue re-opens because I am planning on having the next chapter submitted and hopefully up.
I\'m glad you stopped by.
~Lacey
The Choice by Sarakime
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Harry, Ron, and Hermione arrive at Spinners End shortly after 6th Year looking for Horcruxes, Hermione makes a most shocking discovery: Draco Malfoy, dying into the shadows of the abandoned house, alone and helpless. She is faced with a difficult choice - should she leave him to die, or actually help him?
Written for the final for From Fluff to Fanfiction OWL Level class. I am Sarakime of Slytherin.
Vertigo by Lioness06
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Lily liked stability and security in her life. As Lily enters into her seventh year at Hogwarts, she’s eager to be surrounded once again by the same friends, students, classes, professors, and rules. Instead she finds her thoughts in disorder and feelings toward a particular Gryffindor student whirling dizzyingly around in her mind. It all started, and where this story begins, at the end of Lily’s sixth year where an unexpected conversation brings to light new information.
Date: 11/24/07 Title: Chapter 7: Sic erat in fatis
hey i just read your whole story and i love it! i'm sad that you ended with the death scene but you did a really good job of portraying Lily in it. I loved your characterization throughout...its just as i'd imagined lily and james to be...thanks for the story/chapter!
~rainydaze
Author's Response: Thanks! I really worked on getting the characters realistic and close to cannon - with the limited cannon we have. I know last chapter is really sad, but the death scene I felt was fitting to the story.
Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...
*DH spoilers, obviously*
NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Sorting Ceremony
Really good start! I love Teddy so this sounds great...
Constructive Criticism: I've noticed some grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story. (not major ones, maybe you could just go through and clean it up...eg. Kingsley's name in Ch.1 is spelled "Kingsly"...)
Also. I think characterization might be a little off with Teddy. Like when he turns his hair pea green; in reality, I'm sure that people would supress their nerves, not broadcast them to the world, especially in a new environment, i dunno...thats more of a picky comment, because its not set in stone that that wouldn't happen.
Finally, my major problem with this chapter is that I'm afraid that Professor Obando is going to be just like Dumbledore, because the whole thing about Dumbledore is that he was unique in his eccentricity and wisdom so I would ask you not to make that happen...:)
On the plus side: I REALLy like this story. Teddy is written very well for the most part, and I like attention to detail with Victoire and everything...I hope you update this soon as it is a pleasure to read.
Thanks for listening (er...reading)!
--rainydaze
The Horridly Cheerful Valentine's Day by Gin_Drinka
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Lily Evans never had any intention to spend a day at Hogsmeade with James Potter...of course, things don't always turn out as planned.
A short, sweet story about James and Lily's first unofficial date.
Winner of the Hufflepuff Valentine's Day Challenge
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
cuteness abounds!
Author's Response: yup. Thanks
7 Ways to Win Her Heart by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: COMPLETED
Ah, Christmas. The season of joy and love. And Head Boy James Potter fully intends to use the loving atmosphere to his advantage by coming up with plans and using them to capture the heart of Lily Evans.
But since when do plans transfer beautifully from parchment to life?
Six plans become five, five become four, four become three, three become two, two become one, and then there are none.
Then his friends come to the rescue.
But of course.
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter VI
hey im a new reader :)
just wanted to say i like the story so far...
so update soon please :)
also, in ch.1 you mention remus writing a plan where he got everything wrong, so then Gemma redid the plans...where can one get a copy of said original plans? because they have potential for hilariosity, lol...
anyway, good job and stuff....
how long are you planning on making this, by the way? just wondering...hopefully LONG. lol.
:)
Author's Response: Haha! About Remus\' original plans, I won\'t be writing anything about them, because they\'re really terrible. Honest. There\'ll be all the seriously mushy stuff that I\'ll even cringe to write. And about how long I\'m planning to make this, there\'s only going to be one more chapter! Sorry, but the shorter the better, because I tend to abandon long fanfics (but I am trying to change this bad habit). Well welcome to Mugglenet Fanfiction! You\'ll find a lot of brilliant fanfics here. And thanks for the review! :D
For the Lacking of It by coppercurls
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: This is a sequal to O Ye Of Little Faith!
Set ten years after graduation from Hogwarts and the final battle. Draco makes steps toward a reconcilliation with Hermione, but a horrible accident threatens to shatter all he has regained. Now the couple has to figure out how to reforge what was broken, or discover if some things cannot be healed.
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 3: I'm Fine, Really
great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it!
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 4: Stop being an ass
oh!! i love this chapter!! update update update (please)!!!!
oh my goodness...update! so good...
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I\'m doing my best to get this out as quickly as I can despite RL and its time consuming ways!
Date: 12/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Meddling in the Affairs of Dragons
oooh! update soon! yay for dragons! and draco! and arent they kinda the same thing, lol...
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m working on it. Once I get part of my thesis done the next chapter will go up, I promise! And yeah, I like making Draky work with dragons. He\'s got a good feel for it.
From Afar by Roxy Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A collection of short poems written by the characters of the Potterverse.
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Fat Friar's Poem
really great work :)
you bring such perspective to the characters its amazing...and i like this version of why the friar is...a friar..:)
blink-blink by Stubbornly_appeared
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "blink-blink
wake up, australia
breath..."
Monica Wilkins begins a letter to someone that doesn't exist with an invisible war on the television.
Date: 11/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: blink-blink
i love this sooo much!
i cant even describe...your style is very.. ack cant think of the word but its good...
effective is a synonym but not the word...ackness...well, ill just say effective :)
Author's Response: ;) Thanks. I\'m glad it... affected you.
Boy by SiriuslyMental
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Nine year-old Harry Potter is sure that normal is just not enough. In fact, with the odd happenings that always seem to occur when he's around and his dead parents, he's convinced that there's no other explanation - he's a superhero. But when Harry runs away from home it may take more than superpowers to bring him back.
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Intro
awesome, you've really managed to capture Harry in the way that I see him :)