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Love, Werewolves, and Animagi by Mistletoe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hullo! I'm Lily Evans, and I'm starting my seventh year at Hogwarts soon. I'm Head Girl with James Potter, which I'm secretly thrilled about, emphasis on the secretly. Seriously secretly, like even to me, kind of. Well, I must be off!

Hey! Lily! Oh, sorry, so rude of me, I'm Anna, Anna Boothe. Lily's uh, hold on let me grab my trunk, it's just slipped out of my fingers. Where was I? Oh yes, Lily's best friend. We're inseperable, really. Like two peas in a pod and whatnot. Where is she, anyway? Er, well it was nice meeting you, I've got to go catch the train!

Oi! Did you just see Evans? I've been looking for her and I thought I just saw her here. I'm rather excited about being Head Boy with her; it'll give me a chance to show her the real James Pot--

What are you going on about, Prongs? Why are you even listening to this nutter? We've got to catch the train. Probably talking to you about Evans, am I right? He would talk to a tree about Evans if he could. Moony, Wormtail, help me get this starry-eyed git onto the train before it leaves without us...

You two are helpless, don't you think, Pete?

More helpless than two Grindylows out of water...

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This is Lily and Anna's final year at Hogwart's School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Lily is hiding her secrets from everyone, even herself. Anna is as noncommittal as ever. James is getting his act together. Peter is thinning out. And unbeknownst to everyone, Remus and Sirius are gallivanting off to unseen parts of the castle. Amidst all said frolicking, Lily notices something very strange about the single days that Remus Lupin is missing and all tranquility goes awry.

[RLSB: Slash is minor and for a later chapter :]]

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

You know, I don't know how I missed this story when I was last at your author's page. This definitely looks like it's going to turn out the be a Lily/James fic, but it's in Marauder Era, huh? Oh well. I love how you introduced it with present tense, and you solely focused on Lily's thoughts, then you panned out to give us some action! And who's this Anna character? Hm? Anyway, I LOVE it, as I do your other writing. :]

~emily.

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah-ha. Here's Anna. Again with the ambiguous intro. I LOVE IT! I really like Anna too. She seems the perfect balance to who Lily is. You've introduced this action very quickly. How long are you planning on making this and are there going to be some more POVs? I'm itching with excitement! Update soon?

~emily.

Author's Response: Em-- THANKS! This has been a strange fic in the making, but I\'ve finally got a defined plot laid out. It\'s going to be exactly 6 chapters, each of the remaining told from a Marauder\'s POV, so get excited! And it was originally a L/J fic, but I fell out of love with the pair so I changed it. Thanks for the reviews!

Broken Hearts, Unlike Broken Quills, Are Not Easily Mended by Mistletoe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Growing up together, Sirius and Remus formed a bond that even their two other best friends couldn’t understand. Then something terrible happened and both of their lives shattered to the ground around their feet. Fourteen years later, they are reunited and their worlds are turned upside down, however different their worlds had become.

The missing scenes of Order of the Phoenix.

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 3: Of Chocolate, Memories, and Excuses

Omgah, how am I related to someone who writes so beautifully? Seriously, there is no way I could ever do what you do. I love the beginning of this when Remus calls him a dog! That's so funny! And the flashback was priceless as well. You picked a scene from their history that shows each of their characters perfectly! Lovely job, sis.

Author's Response: Well thanks for the praise, Em. It means a lot, really!

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Of Escapes, Explanations, and Bleak Surroundings

Your description is to die for in this chapter. The tension you created between the two was almost tangible. Really great job, sis!

Author's Response: Thanks, em! *huggles*

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 2: Of Introductions, Inebriation, and Comfort

Wow. You wrote Remus so well, even through his intoxication. He seemed so in control as one would think he was. I feel so overcomplimently. Lol, I've been saying some many good things about your writing, but I just can't stop! The little bits and pieces we see of Molly and Arthur are wonderful. They fit their characters so well. I love how Molly seemed so reserved, but she still had to yell about the dinner. Typical.

Author's Response: YAY! I was nervous about Molly. Really nervous. Thanks again, Em!

Monsters Under The Bed by Mistletoe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live."

A wise man had once told Harry Potter this simple phrase. Harry, in turn, passed on this advice to a brooding Teddy, who suffers once again as the Christmas holidays approach. More than he shows, the death of his young parents affect Teddy. They shouldn't have died, it should have been somebody else. Yet, Teddy has been forced to grow up without them, envious of those with loving parents. Victoire can't help but wonder why Teddy is unable accept the amount of love he has around him. Maybe, with a little persuasion and some good advice from a caring godfather, Teddy can finally get over the death of the parents that he never had the chance to know.

Character Death warning for previous deaths. They don't actually occur in the story.

Submitted by Mistletoe of Slytherin for the Winter Tales Challenge.

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Cost Of Glory

Kat, this was so good! I love how you portrayed Teddy! He was so much like his parents to me. *tear* you did a wonderful job of creating a plot and weaving in the pieces of his relationship with Harry, Victoire, and his parents so well! I love how he wrote them letters. That was so clever...

~emily.

Author's Response: Thanks, Em! Haha, it\'s so weird seeing you on the site... Oh well!

Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas by KritchMis

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “Hell -- Oomph! Ouch. Sorry, Sirius decided it’d be fun to trip me.”

“I did not!”

“Oh don’t deny it Sirius, I saw you too. Hello there! You’re here to read, aren’t you? Isn’t that great Remus? Remus?”

“Wha – Oh yes, lovely… So sorry, love, but what are you talking about?”

“You’d think being a werewolf, you could hear twice as good as the normal wizard.”

“Anna! Keep it down!”

“But why, Remus? Everyone’s going to find out once they read Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas, and then, why would you care?”

“You three are completely ignoring the company. How rude. Don’t mind them, they’ve got the manners of a teaspoon, I tell you.”

The other three sigh as one at Sirius.

“You’ll really like this story. It’s better than my daddy’s, but shhhh, don’t tell him I said that.”

“It’s about a werewolf community, us four and Time-Turners.”

“That hardly says anything at all, you two!”

“We’re sent on a mission of spying on a community I already knew well. Yes, I am a werewolf –“

“Harmless though, I tell you!”

“Those two have a project through the Department of Mysteries –“

“It’s great fun working there.”

“Nat, enough. We’re supposed to figure out how to finish the Time-Turners. Unofficially of course.”

“We’ve got to go…Happy reading!”

“NAT!”

This is a story written by Mistletoe (Kat) and myself using our OC's (Natalie Carmen and Anna Boothe), Remus and Sirius. These four are an unlikely group for a mission, but that's indeed what happens. Sent on a whirlwind journey by the Order of the Phoenix and uncomfortable with each other, they're a little lost in the forests of Wales. Where exactly do werewolves and Time-Turners come into the mix? It involves mystery and intrigue, some adventure and fears, a smidgen of flirting and quite a bit of silliness.

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Serious for Strawberries

Well, Kat told me about this story, so I figured I would come check it out! This is Kritchen's chapter, right? I loved the OCs you've created! Nat seems really quick-witted, if you will. We didn't see much of Anna, but the part when she's talking to Nat about the guy hitting on her is cute. This sounds like it's going to develop into a very interesting story and I'm excited for Kat's update!

~emily.

Author's Response: Lol. That\'s great. Yes, that chapter was mine. Anna is all Kat\'s creation. I can\'t take responsibility for her. Lol. I was a little iffy on Anna\'s character so I didn\'t include her much. The next chapter that I wrote has a lot more Anna in it. :]

A Black Tonks by Mistletoe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's the biggest battle I've ever faced in my life: my blood or my love? The two can be ambiguous, but in my case, they are black and white, day and night. I had been seemingly repressed by my family for too long, so I did the one thing that allowed me a choice. I ran away.

TT/AB

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*SQUEEE*

Seriously, I am falling in absolute love with this pairing because of you, Kat. The way you wrote Andromeda was so beautifully perfect. You seemed to get her mixed emotions perfectly, which is really good! And I love Ted-- he seems so genuinely caring. :] You did a nice job of balancing their relationship and you made it seem so real! Anyway, great job!

~emily.

Author's Response: Well dang, Em. *blushes* If you want a really good A/T... I recommend you read kritchen\'s writing. She writes the pair wonderfully. Anyway, thanks for the review sis :]

Curse Me, Lord by Mistletoe

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Once branded by the Dark Mark, the sole most powerful sign on the planet, Bellatrix was sent on a mission. A mission that would mean everything or nothing, and she held the power to decide which. To her Lord it would prove her loyalty, her everything, and she was more than prepared to do just that.

Reviewer: Guhlinda Signed
Date: 07/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: Curse Me, Lord

Sis! This was amazing. Definitely different from what you usually write, but I must say, astounding. You made Bellatrix seem so real and her need for acceptance by Voldemort is so IC. GREEEAAAT!