04/01/08
Hi. This account is shared between the two beaters. Of course, me being the one writing this, is beaternumber1. My sister being the one sitting beside me, is beaternumber2.
Beaternumber1:
Hi! I am a crazy, hyper, 15 year old girl who adores Harry Potter, and writing, and drawing, and swimming, and is OBVIOUSLY the number 1 beater on this account.
Beaternumber2:
Is a lot calmer and more practical than my younger and annoyinger sister. I am 18 and started reading this site because my sister left it open on the computer. I must say, that i like many of these stories almost as much as the actual books.
First the worst, second the best! HAHAHA so there, beaternumber1.
Thanks to Bine for the awesome banner, that can be seen on the beta forum!!
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An Aversion to Change by Misdemeanor1331
Rated: Professors •Summary: After his failed attempt on Dumbledore's life, Draco seeks refuge at the Order of the Phoenix. Sent back to Hogwarts with suspicious title of Head Boy, he is forced to share a dormitory with none other than Hermione Granger. But with war looming on the horizon and another danger even closer to home, their seventh year of Hogwarts is anything but ordinary.
A story of compelling intrigue, hidden motives, dangerous secrets, and obvious passion. Animagi, Quidditch, the Order of the Phoenix. Masquerades and riddles. Hate and love. Pleasure and pain. A blend of contradictions that, for two people, makes a truly unforgettable final year. Slow moving D/Hr with plenty of plot.
Date: 08/05/10 Title: Chapter 42: An Aversion to Change
Hello,
I wanted to let you know that I am very impressed with this story. It is a unique idea and you write it so well that we are never sure what to believe. I wanted to trust Draco so bad but even when you are listening to his thoughts you are never sure what to believe.
I think your portrayal of Draco is really well done and I love the idea that all he cares about is staying alive. I think this really fits with his personality and past experiences. He is just a weak kid in this fic and I look forward to seeing how he develops in your sequel.
As for Hermione I realize that sometimes we have to be flexible with characters to make a story fit but I really don't think that Hermione would have told Draco so much about the order no matter how in love she was. Even if she did tell Draco I am positive that she would have connected him to the leak as soon as Ron mentioned it.
I love the description and details that you include in your writing. The portions of the man talking to Voldemort are really well done.
Thanks for a great story and I can't wait for more. I especially hope we learn more about the ghost and the torture room in the sequel.
BB
(by the way I only ever read completed fics but since you've kind of trapped me in the story you had better finish this sequal FAST :)
Author's Response: I see Hermione as a very trusting character. Coupled with the whirlwind of love and the stress of the upcoming battle, I think she just needed an objective outlet - someone intelligent and knowledgeable about the situation, but no longer in the middle of it all. For her, this outlet was Draco, who, to her knowledge, had forsaken Voldemort when he took refuge with the Order. Obviously, a big mistake. I see your point, however. :)
And I'll try to post the sequel as quickly as I can! I appreciate your patience, however. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Becoming a Dark Lord by FinalCow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Voldemort knows it's great being the Dark Lord; it's a position he wants to keep. But even the most malevolent maniac can't stand when the forces of fashion conspire against him! A tale of organized mayhem.
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11, Snape: The Advisor
Ahahahaha That is like the most awesomest ending in the entire world. My mom and sisters are standing at the top of the stairs asking why i'm laughing like a maniac! RANDOM: From reading Fanfiction and Harry Potter i have learned just how many types of flowers can be used as girls names... Violet, Rose, Pansy, Lily, Petunia..... interesting, very interesting. Anywaty great job i absolutly adored it!
Once There Was A Darkness: Year One by C_A_Campbell
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for Best Female Original Character. Twelve years ago, one man's life was changed forever by three simple words: “Severus, I'm pregnant.”
Now, twelve years later, a girl will embark on the journey of a lifetime. But life at Hogwarts for a first year is far from simple, especially not when she's in the same year as Harry Potter. She will face enemies, choices and danger, while struggling to deal with her past's dark secrets that, after all these years, still threatens to destroy her.
One girl's journey. One man's desperate search. One last chance for Severus Snape to find the daughter he lost.
Year One of Seven of the Once There Was A Darkness series. Year Two now posted.
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen: Nothing But the Truth (pt 2)
This is a completly and totally awesome story! I can't believe how well you characerized Snape! It was amasing! You had a couple typo's though and you seem to type the same word twice alot.... I do that too... Anyway great job!
You Want To Make A Memory? by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Chapter Ninety Six is posted!
This is the story of four boys. This is the story of a boy from a family he wants to escape from. This is the story of a boy who is from a family he loves deeply, but lacks the gift of a best friend. This is the story of a boy who has been living with a curse his entire life, fighting to overcome it. This is the story of a boy who wishes to show people what he can do. This is the story of how these four boys came to know each other, of how they became friends. This is the story of their unbreakable bond, of a bond that could survive any test, any trial. This is a story that will ultimately end in tragedy.
Nominated for a 2007 and 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder's Era Featured Mugglenet Fanfiction, October 2011
Date: 05/29/08 Title: Chapter 36: Never Forget a Name
This chapter was really good! Please hurry with the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well, I got an email saying the next chapter was approved, but I think it\'s stuck in the queue because it hasn\'t appeared yet. You\'ll get to read it soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 27: Ends May Bring Peace
This chapter was so sad! I cried for almost the entire thing and my mom kept looking at me like i was crazy. I guess it it to cloze to home, my grandpa is dieing of blood cancer. Anyway, i abso.uly adore this story. I've been reading it for 4 hours straight! Great Job!
Author's Response: Don\'t worry, I\'ve gotten weird looks too whenever I\'m reading something on the computer, usually laughing at something. I\'m sorry about your grandpa :(. Wow, four hours? *Applaudes* you have an excellent attention span. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 34: Loyalty
ahh! no this chapteer can't be over, no!!!!!! Please hurry with the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, it\'s over, this chapter. There\'s plenty more to come! Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 35: Infirmary Visits and Warnings
Has this even been validated yet? I'm off to find out. If it has WHY HAVEN"T I READ IT YET!?!?!?
-beaternumber1
Author's Response: Nope, I just put it in the queue a few days ago, so it\'s not validated yet.
Potter's Pentagon: The Five (Book One) by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: WARNING! This story contains a jingle-bell antler headband, a shower of potatoes, boy/girl mushiness, underwear karaoke, family trouble, an excessively adorable werewolf, death, the song "Werewolves of London," betrayal, and the word 'Jordan' five times in a row near the beginning of chapter seven.
Twenty-one years after Voldemort's defeat, five fourth-years are faced with a new threat. Will all of the five stay true to the light side? Will they all emerge whole in the end? Will Jordan Potter ever get a life? You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll gasp, you'll sigh! Part one in a trilogy!
Well, after much deliberation and consideration, I've decided to submit my future-gen trilogy! This particular installment is three years old, so it's definitely different from my current writing style, but I'm quite fond of the characters.
DH is disregarded. It's a total coincidence that one of the main characters is named Ted Lupin.
Starring Quicksilver Quills 2008 Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, and Emma Weasley, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin!
Five times nominated (once for each member of Potter's Pentagon!) for the Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards, and nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards...
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That
I love, love, love Haley! She acts just like me! She is hyper and funny and pranky! And her name even rythmes with mine! I know you have loads of other stories and loads of othe people probably review you, but i always adore when someone tells me that my stories are great (not so much when they tell me they'r terrible) So once again... This story is better than alot of published books that i've read! I started this story this morning at about 12:30 (i suppose thats not morning...) and i just finished it at 7:02. I havn't stopped for anything but to eat! I'm off to read your next book. Can't wait to read more.
- Bailey (beaternumber1)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Haley, too! And no, I absolutely NEVER tire of geting good reviews... I get excited every time I get a new review. I\'m so glad that you like his story, because I wrote it three years ago when I was thirteen, so it\'s totally different from my current writing style.
The Little Girl In White by hermione210
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Hermione moves into a new apartment and is shocked when she wakes up on her first day of living there. Who is this little girl? Why won't she talk? Hermione is determined to find out.
Date: 04/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Discoveries
I wish you'de finish this! It was the first story i read on this sight and I check on it every once in a while to see if it has been updated.... I joined in 2007 and again. FINISH THIS STORY! Please.
Wazlibs' Wizzil Woozis by Amara Anon
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: It's Ron's first disastrous day working at Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. If things weren't bad enough, a very peculiar customer shows up... post-DH,
pre-Epilogue. [Oneshot]
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Wazlibs' Wizzil Woozis
Thats so funny! Really short but great story all the same! I loved how there actually is someone who's name Roonil Wazlib...
Long-Distance Extendable Ears by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary: Fred is dead.
But that's just the beginning! Because one of George's ears is up in heaven, and the other is down on earth...
Oh, the possibilities!
Written for the Next Great Adventure challenge on the MNFF beta boards. I am Schmerg_The_Impaler of Hufflepuff House.
Twice nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts Story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards!
Date: 04/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One and Only
I just read this story for the second time, it was just as great as the first time! I laughed and cried and gave the computer wierd looks. You really should publish some of your work.
Smiles,
Beaternumber1
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! This is my personal favorite fanfic I've written... and maybe one of my favorite pieces of writing! I'll tell you a secret, though... I've actually published a lot of my work under my real name-- a bunch of magazines and newspapers-- and six of my theatre reviews were in the Washington Post this year. So if you ever read a really, really weird story or a silly, ridiculous poem, or a theatre review full of stupid puns by a teenage girl... it may just have been me! ^_^
Potter's Pentagon: The Truth (Book Two) by Schmerg_The_Impaler
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.
WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!
Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.
Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.
And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?
Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.
Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: In Which Lee Comes To Light
ok Haley is still my fav, but Emma Giorgi and Teddy are pretty darn close! Just so you know I started readin The five at 12:39 this morning. Its now 11:48 pm. So as you can tell i love these stories. ( If you can think of anyother complements just pretend that I said them K? ) So anyway... goodnight!
-Beaternumber1
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I can\'t believe you finished my two books in one day... your eyes must be blurry, and your head must be spinning! (That\'s how I felt when I read all of Dylan Meconis\' brilliant webcomic \"Bite Me\" in one day.) And I\'m so glad you like Emma-- a lot of people hate her. There\'s a whole crazy story from Emma\'s point of view called \"Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums,\" which is a spoof of \"Pride and Prejudice,\" and the first four chapters are up on my profile-- you might like it!
Once There Was A Darkness: Year Two by C_A_Campbell
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for the Best Female Original Character. Shiloh Sander’s second year begins peacefully, but it is a peace that is easily shattered when words of blood appear on Hogwarts’ ancient walls. With rumours of the Heir of Slytherin floating through the halls, battlelines are drawn in the Slytherin common room, between those who will support the Heir and those who will not. Soon Shiloh must decide where she stands. But the choice is only the beginning. In the middle of it all, Severus Snape continues his diligent search to find the daughter he lost, never knowing that this is the year it will come to an end. One girl’s choice. One man’s deepest wish. One year that will change both their lives…forever.
Sequel to Once There Was A Darkness: Year One. Warnings of Abuse and Mental Disorders are for brief mentions of child abuse and insanity.
Date: 11/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: They Called Us Heretics
Oh Oh i hope what i think is going to happen happens! But i'm not gonna say what i think because if i'm wrong it'll sound really stupid....
Your story so far is absolutly amazing! I think my favorite character is Jacob right now i wanna know more about him. He seems like he has a secret. Are Nicolette, Persephone and Valient in their third year or are they second years too?
Any way, Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Hogwarts Houses Divided by Inverarity
Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Summary:
Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.
The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?
Date: 11/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters
That was great! You are an amazing writer. This morning i was reading this chapter but i didn't finish it, so my teacher let me read part of it in English class today! Anyway, the ending was superb, I can't believe how well you tied everything up. Though the favor that Teddy owes could be a great sequal. I really liked Ophilia's character, and Violets. I normally like the Slytherins in stories, even though on sorting quizzes and stuff i always wind up a Hufflepuff. That's okay, Hufflepuffs are awesome!
Anyway great job... and i'm off to read your other stories! : )
~Beaternumber1
Date: 08/18/08 Title: Chapter 21: Scars
This was a realley awesome chapter keep up the good work! : )
Date: 06/30/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Riot Before Christmas
Great chapter! I cant wait for the next one!
-beaternumber1
Date: 06/21/08 Title: Chapter 9: The War Season
I think that this is my favorite chapter so far! I absolutly love it! Please hurry with the next chapter!
Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity
AHHH!!!!! How could you stop, jk but please, please, please update soon. This is one of my favorite stories on fanfiction!
Date: 06/29/08 Title: Chapter 10: Slytherin Qualities
This was a very interesting chapter. It really showed us a little more about Violet. I am beginning to think that the sorting hat didn't really put any student in a place that they didn't belong. It just put them in a house where certain atrebutes could develope. I think that Teddy is good and by being in gryfindor he is becoming braver as he tries to live up to all his expectations. I think that Violet could be in Ravenclaw because she thinks about things so throughly. She could be in Gryfindor because she can stand up for what she believes in. She could be in Huflepuff because she is a hard worker. Or she could be in Slytherin because she has determination and she is a leader.
I can'tait to read the next chapter!
- beaternumber1
Date: 09/15/08 Title: Chapter 25: Goblins & Elves
YAY! I knew Slytherins were cool even if i hated Draco. I love you rcharacter's especially Violet. She wasn't inthis chapter so much but i can't wait for the next ones. Kai is being really brave going to help those kids like that. If he's in Ravenclaw wouldn't he have thought about a plan alittle more... or am i just being steriotypical? Golly and the other elves can always go and get another job can't they? I really hope Ophilia can help Teddy out, she's a great character. She's Slytheriny, without being evil. I also really liked what Stephen did, i didn't know he had it in him... but i'm glad he did.Anyway great job and hurry with the next chapter!
Smiles,
Beaternumber1