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09/06/08

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To Find the Truth by hopelesslyhopeful

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny have led a happy life together that now includes their four children. But when Lily discovers a new 'talent' and old enemies combine with new, can the children of Order members and their parents unite and prevail?

To Rekindle the Flame sequel, although it's not necessary for you to read that story first to understand

Categories: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: No | Words: 61902 | Hits: 123975 | Published: 02/02/07 | Updated: 11/27/09
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Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Spy Trouble

this was great i need more more now!!

Things Aren't Always Black and White by padfootsgirl1981

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story

Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”

Categories: Marauder Era
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 28 | Completed: No | Words: 175402 | Hits: 242692 | Published: 02/03/07 | Updated: 01/16/10
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Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 07/17/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 20 - The Curious Incident of Two Wet Gryffindors in a Dormitory: Part Two

hey when are they getting together when are you posting more chapters... i COMMAND you to WRITE MORE A LOT MORE. PLZ AND THXS U

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 07/14/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Aftermath: Part Two

i think sam has redeemed himself and to be perfectly honest emma really mad me mad how can she not realize that sam was talking about her. i mean how dense can you get

Potter's Pentagon: The Five (Book One) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: WARNING! This story contains a jingle-bell antler headband, a shower of potatoes, boy/girl mushiness, underwear karaoke, family trouble, an excessively adorable werewolf, death, the song "Werewolves of London," betrayal, and the word 'Jordan' five times in a row near the beginning of chapter seven.

Twenty-one years after Voldemort's defeat, five fourth-years are faced with a new threat. Will all of the five stay true to the light side? Will they all emerge whole in the end? Will Jordan Potter ever get a life? You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll gasp, you'll sigh! Part one in a trilogy!

Well, after much deliberation and consideration, I've decided to submit my future-gen trilogy! This particular installment is three years old, so it's definitely different from my current writing style, but I'm quite fond of the characters.

DH is disregarded. It's a total coincidence that one of the main characters is named Ted Lupin.

Starring Quicksilver Quills 2008 Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, and Emma Weasley, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin!

Five times nominated (once for each member of Potter's Pentagon!) for the Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards, and nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards...

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 08/24/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

i had my doubt about reading this book i dont like reading much when book 7 has been diregarded... and im SO GLAD i gave this stpry a chance keep up the gud work and im defintely a fan now

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you so much! I'm not normally into book 7 disregarded fics, either- the only reason why this is 'disregarded' is that I wrote it way before book 7 came out, and it'd be impossible for me to edit it to make it fit canon, since Lupin is dead and stuff in canon. But I promise the sequels are even better!

Just Sand and Water by kbell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Solid stone is just sand and water, baby...

Life is like solid stone...just bits and pieces mixed with time to create something stronger...

Life in the time of the First War is just bits and pieces, mixed with time to become stronger than us...stronger than anything we could ever imagine...

The story of the Marauders, their classmates, their 7th year, and those bits and pieces, and time going on...solid stone.

...sand and water, and a million years gone by.

Warnings apply mainly to later chapters

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

hey love da begininin realli sad hope it gets happier

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: One for the Road

hey dont think us this story is great now just keep writing

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 10/22/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

this was a great story hope u have a sequel and if u do plz tell me when

Author's Response: I have written the start of a sequel, but haven't decided whether or not to post it here. It's currently posted on fanficton.net (under the name Cassandra's Cross), but I had so many difficulties with MuggleNet while posting this story that I'm not sure it's worth the hassle to post here as well. Feel free to check out my other work on FFN, though. Hope to see you there!

Albus Potter and the Year of the Badger by Sly One

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

dis is gettin interesting way to spice things up

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Of Badgers and Broomsticks

that last part bout scorpius gettin marreied to da broom was funny

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Apologies and Mythologies

i love this write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Author's Response:

I am working on Chapter 8, can't get it out of the queue at the moment. I have two primary Mods, one is on vacation the other one just looked at it recently and rejected it, so I have to finish the edits put it back into the queue, wait for a mod...then hope it passes.Oh well!

Stay with me!

SLy

Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

this is really good

Author's Response:

THanks!

SLy

Sin by SexY_LydZ

Rated: Professors •
Summary:

‘Thou shalt not sin’ – Bible

Yeah, right.

Sirius knows what he wants and he’s not afraid to chase it. She makes him feel more than he’s ever felt before, but getting what he wants may cause him more heartache than he ever imagined. Thus begins a thrilling game, a game of vice and virtue, of betrayal and affection, of sin and atonement.

The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.

Categories: Marauder Era
Characters: None
Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: Yes | Words: 33975 | Hits: 5009 | Published: 12/09/08 | Updated: 06/06/09
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Reviewer: dedequeen Signed
Date: 06/30/09 Title: Chapter 1: Gluttony

its getting good jus finished da 1st chapter and im very interested

Author's Response: Great! Keep reading :D