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07/14/05

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xybolic.

Call me Aji. I am an eighteen-year-old student who studies architecture, though my real dream since I was six was to do animation. I am an artist; I draw and design. Writing and reading are my passion, coming in second behind my love for sketching.

People see me as a boring nerd whose everyday ritual is devoid of any social activity, which is partially true; I am a nerd and I don't socialise as much as one would normally. I am split whether I am a boring person or not. My best friend and very close friends would surely say no, but my sisters would probably say yes. I guess, for you to know, it would depend on our level of interaction as acquaintances.

Little facts:
-Contrary to popular belief, I am, in fact, a creature with two X-chromosomes.
-I tend to buy lots of books and leave most of them in my bookshelf unread due to my busy schedule.
-I'm an Evangelical Christian who is the only one in a Roman Catholic clan.
-I have been single all my life and I prefer it that way until--dare I say it?--marriage. And religion/belief is not the reason (well, partly), can you believe it? It's because boys are too high-maintenance. I love my 'Me' time.
-I already have names for my future children, and they are based on Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl. If I wouldn't be able to conceive, I'll adopt.
-I love Monty Python, A Very Potter Musical, Potter Puppet Pals, Phineas&Ferb, and Glee.
-I had a crush on Chris Colfer when they did Vogue in Glee.
-I hate Twilight. End of.
-During schooldays, I tend to down more or less five cups of coffee.
-I've gone more than three days without sleep. That's normal for architecture students.
-I've never smoked. The smell is nauseating.
-I love swearing colourfully and I borrow swearwords from my favourite books and shows. Dobby's sock.
-I did karate and achieved a black belt and a purple belt in two styles/systems/schools. Beware.
-I read mangas, and I prefer them over anime. I am picky with what I read though.
-I love thick books.
-My favourite punctuations are the semi-colon and em-dash.




My Writing, A History.

JK Rowling inspired me. I was amazed upon reading Harry Potter when I was twelve. That's when I began to write. And also discovered fan fiction. Puberty immensely affected my writing at that time; my genre was clichéd and shallow romance (that I have had no idea about, but I wrote them anyway) and my characters were Sues. My ego had been overly inflated by nonsensically praising reviews. When I realised that my writing was horrid, I left fan fiction for two or three years while trying to make my writing better. Afterwards, I wrote my Harry Potter fan fiction Albus Severus which was quite decent. Then I had another year of writing nothing until I decided to do Artemis Fowl flash fiction exercises to keep what I've improved on so far from deteriorating. I collected them in my A Nib's Babble in Fanfiction.net under the penname xybolic.

My writing is mostly in the humour genre. I think of myself as unfunny and not witty at all, so it makes me wonder how in the world this happened. Hilarious one-liners are hard to come by, and when they do (rarely, mind), I sort of build a humourous situation around it. That's how I write. Eoin Colfer also probably influenced me.

I have yet to find my writing style. I usually have hiatus more often than I write so my writing is a tad undeveloped. I'm trying though, since it's my dream to be published.


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Date: 10/23/05 Title: None

awww..... they're soooo cute! i really love your fic. you're ever so talented! i love it when tonks get angry everytime remus call her nymphadora. i love you and your fic! hope you update soon!

Author's Response: aww thanks , lol =). chapter 3 is in queue right now but it is taking a VERY long time. I hope that's a good thing. hehe, I know, remus just won't learn...or will he? thanks for the review!



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Date: 12/23/05 Title: None

This is so funny! Awesome! the rapunzel thing is--so what's the word?-- I cant find the word good enough to describe it, but, it's so good!

Author's Response: Thank you. Its so great to get positive feedback from people out there.



A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/06/06 Title: Chapter 11: More Detentions

I dont know at how I'll act. I mean, I love that punk look Stacey's got but I dont like the way she acts on the tutoring.... how will I choose? Love her or hate her???? neways, I love this!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/18/05 Title: Chapter 8: Conversations

You're a very brilliant writer! About your survey, I'm curious too, you know, if boys read romance fics. It's driving my mind crazy when I think of that. Well, my answer is maybe half because I'm a bit of a tomboy and I read this so.... half. half of me's a boy anyway.

Author's Response: HeHe. I hope you don't hurt yourself too much. Thanks very much, too!



Perfect for Each Other? by Lilypudding

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has a crush on a certain Gryffindor in her year, and his name isn't James Potter. Find out what happens when Lily, with the help of her best friends Andromeda and Alice, try to get Sirius to go on a date with her. But are they perfect for each other? Only time will tell. See how Lily got over a girlish crush and met the true man of her dreams. This fic was moved from the Marauder Era. COMPLETE!
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dreams and Diaries

This is bloody brilliant! I love it so much I might just marry it! OMG, I'm in love with a fanfic!

My favourite quote, just so you know: “It seems as if the sixth year’s most famous couple has finally gotten together. Minerva, I believe you owe me one lemon drop.”

Dumby's really amusing and funny!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, ray_16! Hey, I'm in love with a fictional character (my friends call me LongbottomsLady) and my beta, Snufflessnogger, is in love with a dead fictional characher, so they'res nothing wrong with being in love with a fanfic! Thanks so much about that quote, I thought it was a little OOC for McGonagall, I was very worried about it. I've written about half of the fifth chapter, before midterms got in the way, so I've finished the meeting with Dumby, and had to make him more serious, unfortunately, because the fifth chapter is less passionate, and I ran out of good ideas. Thanks for the review!



Dear Dumby by Oppungo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What happens when Dumbledore has his latest "brilliant" idea, to start an advice column, and call it 'Dear Dumby'? Letters from some of our favourite Hogwarts students, some of our not so favourite Hogwarts students, some not even Hogwarts students at all, and, of course, lots of madness!

Pre-HBP for obvious reasons!
Nominee for the Best Humour Award in the Quicksilver Quill Awards! Many thanks to all who voted for it!
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 11/13/06 Title: Chapter 12: The Notice - Part 2

lol. I love this ending. I thought the final chappie was the last one so I didn't read this anymore. But thankfully, i did. This is, as usual, funny!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m really glad you enjoyed it and carried on reading!



Ginny's Midnight Drama by Mind_Over_Matter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
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Oh no! Ginny has found her in an emergency situation of dire need. Harry lies before her and Ron and Hermione are long gone. Whatever shall she do? Well, it looks like Ginny is feeling a bit Dramatic.

Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Wake Up, Harry!

Haha.:D



The Problem With Polyjuice by Duck the Duck

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Summary: Sirius Black thinks he’s got the perfect plan to get his best friend James Potter together with Lily Evans. But when the plan doesn’t go accordingly, chaos, confusion and mixed messages reign the halls of Hogwarts. Has Sirius ruined James’ chances with the girl of his dreams?
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 2: In Which Sirius Is An Idiot

I said it once in HPFF, I'll say it again: Oh this is bloody brilliant! Wicked! Sirius is really an idiot (but cute)! I cant wait what Prongs' reaction will be. Oh my bloody gosh! Trouble times lie ahead, Padfoot.... ;-)



Siriusly Me by Hallie Black

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The story of the wonderful life of Sirius Black told by the one and only, Sirius Black!

CHAPTER 5 SUBMITTED!
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Getting to know me...

Sirius, my one and only love, i vote for you coz i devote any day of the year just for you! Sorry, James, but Black is my favourite colour. Rock on, Sirius!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: Getting to know me...

Because I am such a idiotic, pompous whatever, I'm gonna brag that I dont have to wait for chapter 2 because.... *wink*........... Sirius, my one and only, you'll always be Hogwarts Number One Hottie!!! Hey that rhymes! Maybe I should get into poetry.... rating: 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: Getting to know me...

Hi,, I'm bored to death so I'll give you a review!



12 Days of Christmas at Hogwarts by Tania Dalyn4

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Challenge #4- for Hufflepuff house. The inspiration for this version of "12 Days" is one of my favorite xmas tunes "The 12 Pains of Christmas". At the end of each stanza, the lines in parentheses are Harry's musings on the gifts of that day. I fixed the 8th day, thanks everyone!
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Xmas with Harry

Watch your aim you bloody prat, I want children
someday!

Haha! Bloody brilliant!



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Date: 12/13/05 Title: None

You know what? B'coz I really want you to update, I'll give you another review. I want you to be happy. I'm like obsessed with Seduced by the Toerag and now, this! I love this too! I wish I could marry both of your fics... sigh... oh well, advanced happy x'mas! Your rating is... well, just count how many stars there are in the sky over ten... luv ya!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/12/05 Title: None

I love it! This is one of my faves!



Symphony for Quartet by Tinn Tam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

Winner of the QuickSilver Quills Award, categ. Best Marauder Era.

What did being a Marauder truly mean?... Let's just say that some tunes cannot be played by a lone musician; and those four's lives were certainly not soloists' scores. In class or in detention, in Quidditch matches or full-moon wanderings, fleeing before monsters or confronting dark wizards, they wrote, measure after measure, their own eight-handed piece.

Messrs Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs, are proud to present a Symphony for Quartet.


Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Where another kind is discovered: not-so-pure-blood greasy monkeys

Once again, one of the greatest yet! Sirius is so brave--well--reckless to.... so, that's recklessly brave right? And they're so funny! With that retorts he and James are giving..... update soon!

Author's Response: Sirius is definitely more reckless than brave here. He's just - you know - like a dog who's been locked in a house too long and is finally set free. Running everywhere and messing everything up...



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/22/05 Title: Chapter 1: {YEAR ONE} Gryffindor-Slytherin clash

I really love it! I was like... duh... one of the greatest work I've ever seen!... or read... whatever.... It's so real, ya know. Just like Sirius. And what they did to Regulus was sooo hilarious. Even before Hogwarts, they're natural marauders! and natural flyers too!

“What were you saying about locking him in a cupboard?” shouted James over Regulus’ screams.

They found the perfect cupboard on the third floor, full of fur coats. Before slamming the door shut, Sirius threw a teddy bear in his brother’s face.

This is soo funny! I was rolling on the floor!

Author's Response: Let's say they are already... that kind of kids who can't keep still for two seconds put together! (An idea from my most dreadful baby-sittings perhaps?) I'm so glad you loved it. If I needed a reason to update, the reviews I get there would be enough! Thank you!



Many Letters From McGonagall by KMG

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Professor McGonagall is constantly having to discipline the Marauders for thier deeds. It's not everyday that someone preforms a Switching spell that leaves your hands on a cactus and textbooks falling from the ceiling. These are some of the many letters that she wrote to James Potter's parents about his behavior. There were a LOT of detentions. And a lot pranks.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: The First Year of Complete Misery for the Teachers

Wow, this is--whats the word?--unique! So hilarious! Really! Nearly fell off my seat! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the support. I just sent chapter 2 in Queue. Should be up soon.



A Battle Of Laughter by onmyway

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and George have an unexpected customer who has seriously underestimated their dueling skills...
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So Fred and George in face of death! Well, no, actually. But yes, all the same. Whatever.You get my drift.



But Sirius by Loki MM

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius and Remus are in the library when Sirius happens to notice Regulus sitting next to a girl. A little too close to a girl for big brother's liking. So big brother proceeds to make a foool of himself.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 04/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: But Sirius

This is so hilarious. I was browsing an SBB thread in the beta boards and I saw this suggested. I gave it a go and I'm so glad I did.



The Saving Bunnies From Evil Deaths Society by Just Tink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Every Muggle has heard of Opposite Day, the one day of the year where you're allowed to act completely different than you normally would. But in the Wizarding world Opposite Day is much more literal...
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 11/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Saving Bunnies From Evil Deaths Society

If only we had a real Opposite Day like that... I think I know what'll happen to me; I'll wear pink all over, burn my guitar, and MCR and Green Day posters... I dont think I can't take it. lol. nice story! ^_^

Author's Response: An interesting thought... I would probably become super popular and preppy and hate HP. Thanks for the review!