MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
iLuna17 [Contact]

[Report This]

Stories by iLuna17 [31]
Favorite Authors [1]
Favorite Stories [0]
iLuna17's Favorites [1]
Reviews by iLuna17

Black Dawn by voldiegirl

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It has been five years since the Second Wizarding War, and Scarlet Black is still trying to piece her life back together. Working as a columnist by day and helping select Death Eaters get their lives back on track, she lives each day with the hope of a better tomorrow.

Then, when an old enemy she helped put behind bars escape, Scarlet is tossed into a whirlwind of events that put her out of harm's way and into the reach of the one who still blames her for his brother's death-Charlie Weasley.

What happened during the past five years? Can two enemies work together for their own survival? Will there finally be a day when Scarlet can stop running?

She knows her past, but the future is another subject altogether...

*This is the sequel to "The Secret Life of Scarlet Black".
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 10: Three Little Words

It's official: I love this story

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 11: Walking on Eggshells


The Arcane ScoRA and the Blood Pact by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Albus, Rose, and Scorpius about to return Hogwarts when the Daily Prophet is splattered with headlines of Alarice Dugan, Maddox's mother, proclaiming the exhistance of the Arcane ScoRA and tell the world about the Blood Pact she has made with her son to find justice for her son. Now, all the wizarding world is focused on these three second-years' and their every waking moment.

Staying under the radar should prove simple enough, but between receiving strange gifts of great magical power followed by perfect oppurtunities to use them, it is proving quite difficult. Now it seems like just a matter of time before the Arcane ScoRA first and most important rule is broken, and the secret organization comes crumbling down.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/17/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Finger Prick

Wow. That was extremely deep. I cannot wait to see how Albus and Rose fit into this. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Well, read ahead, and I hope you'll review the other chapters too!

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/17/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Preparing for the Second Year

The plot thickens! I am so excited. I cannot wait to see what happens when the dueling story lines collide, and if Maddox is really guilty. Did I spell that right?

Author's Response: Yes, Maddox (and you did spell it right) is indeed guilty. He sicked a manticore on three first-years.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Front Page

You are amazing. I really love how you combine two amazing story lines, and how you always keep us guessing about the older story line, and how it affects the first. You might want to lay off the cliffhangers though, they may affect your reviews.

Author's Response: Huh? I didn't have that many cliff hangers? I'll have to go back and count to see. And how exactly do cliffhangers effect reviews negatively?

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 11/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Finger Prick

People hate cliffhangers. I personally like them, but. . . others do not feel the same way.

Author's Response: Well, everyone's entitled to their opinions.

Scorpius Malfoy and the Sins of the Fathers by Hotrav

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

We are all influenced by the actions or inactions of our parents. The same is true of Scorpius Malfoy; he has been raised by an overly protective mother and a father who is still coming to grips with the mess that his own father made of his life. Scorpius knows that he will be judged at Hogwarts by what others know or think they know about his father and grandfather.

At Hogwarts Scorpius will meet:

Albus Potter the middle child of ‘The Great Harry Potter’ and Quidditch star Ginny Weasley Potter. A boy who not only has things to live up to but an older brother ready to remind him of who’s boss.

Rose Weasley, Albus’ surrogate sister/first cousin, struggling in her own way, not her mother’s way, to succeed.

Kaitlin Jones, daughter of Tornados player Owain Jones and favorite niece of Gwenog Jones, who is at home on a broom and lost almost everywhere else.

Jimber Dokes recent immigrant from the West Indies trying to fit his own magical heritage Vardoo with the Western style of magic taught at the school

Thad Vance, the Gryffindor Quidditch captain, his grandfather and all of his uncles and aunts were killed by Death Eaters, maybe Lucius Malfoy

Meanwhile in London, Draco and Astoria Malfoy try to build a new life and legacy by betting all they own on a Potions Shop in Diagon Alley.

Beta Reader - Apurva Patel Chapters 1-3

Carol Paquette Chapter 1

Hogwartsbookworm Chapter 4-15

In memory of my Father Horace McConnell 1934-2010

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Visitations

Love it!!!!!!!!!

The Ties that Bind Us by ringobeatlesfan4

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

They were four of the closest friends that the Wizarding World had ever seen, but one of them was hiding a horrible secret.

This is the story of their journey to discover that secret.

This is the story of the aftermath of their discovery.

This is the story of their beginning, their youth, and their everlasting friendship.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning, The End, and Everything In-Between


Author's Response: Thank you very much! Becca:D

Tales of the Battle by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Over fifty people died at the Battle of Hogwarts. There are dozens of stories of loss, betrayal, heroism and sacrifice. These are some of those stories.

Nominated for: Best General (Chaptered) story – Quicksilver Quills 2011

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 12/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Calm Before

I would never have thought to write something like this. I find it beautiful, because no one ever thinks about the supporting roles, only the leads.

Author's Response: Thank you. The inspiration for these stories came from a competition on another site (though they are no longer there, because they didn’t like the idea of me rewriting them, so banned me!). These Tales contain only the supporting characters, although Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny do appear. This story about Poppy had to come first. -N-

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 12/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Galleon

Cho Chang. They never really tell what happened to her. Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks. “Cho Chang married a Muggle” according to JKR, so she survived the battle. But that's all we know. -N-

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 12/05/10 Title: Chapter 3: Great to be Back

You must have done a lot of thinking about her thoughts. Luna is actually very smart, and in the Harry Potter books you sometimes don't see that. She is innocent, wholehearted, and can see the good in most people. (exception- Voldemort and crew) She definetly deserves a spot, maybe even two or three.

Author's Response: This attempt at Luna-logic was one of the hardest things to write. Luna, however pops up in several other chapters alongside Ernie, Seamus and Terry. -N-

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 12/05/10 Title: Chapter 4: Protheroe's Perspective

Great new character. . . I think. I don't have any constructive criticism. You're bloody brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you. I rather like Polly. She was no more than a name in "It Takes Two" but I think that she's fleshed out nicely. -N-

Right up the Road by leftrightmiddle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Starring one quirky redhead, one spunky blonde, one klutzy brunette and two boys who tag along. They're all the best of friends, but can it stay that way? Will they always be right up the road for each other? The ups, downs, joys and excitements of being a fourteen year old witch and the only daughter of the Boy Who Lived.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/22/10 Title: Chapter 0: The Send-Off

I love it. Is it going to be all fluff and pixie dust, though? Or is there going to be a dark twist. (I prefer the latter)

Author's Response: Hmmm.. i wouldn't say all fluff, I'm not a huge fan of that either! As for the dark twist, I'm not sure yet. Let's say for now it's going to be a drama :) Have an amazing day, and thanks so much for reviewing!!!! -bri

Seventh-Year: The Next Generation by Thani Mag

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The first six years at Hogwarts have gone relatively smoothly for Scorpius and Albus. But now, going into their seventh and final year, these two best friends will get caught up in things way over their heads.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 1: Scorpius's Idea of Fun

I loved it. I think that it is fun and upbeat. But. . . Albus does not strike me as the uptight kind of guy. He seems the most like Harry, who is not in anyway, shape or form someone like Hermione, like this Albus is.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review. I'm really sorry this wasn't updated sooner. I have to explain. This was the third site that I posted my story on, and while it was being looked at for validation, I kind of forgot about it. I will update as often and as consistently as the site will allow me from now on, so look for the next chapter, and review that as well! =] As for Albus being like Hermione, well, he's not entirely like her. He is a little bit more uptight and cautious than Harry, but I mean, we only saw a couple of pages of him in the series, and at that time he was only eleven. I hope you will continue to read on and give feedback.

Where Are You? by Ginny Weasley Potter

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Name: Sheila Anne Rhodes
Age: 22
Height: 5ft 3in

Last seen at Fistral Beach wearing an orange bikini. If found, please contact us through any of the numbers listed below.

Someone goes missing at a beach in Newquay and apart from the grieving family members, nobody is really worried. After all, people keep disappearing like that throughout the year, right? Maybe Sheila's father or husband has unknowingly made an enemy somewhere. Newquay is still safe anyway.

That is what Chris Stevens and his steady girlfriend, Cheryl Willis, think as they head off to Cheryl's beach house for a vacation with a few other friends. Everybody is really looking forward for the trip-- it seems to be a breath of fresh air in each of their busy lives.

But what happens when the number of disappearances begins to increase with no trace of any of the victims? All-OC sequel to 'Killer Instincts', but can be read as a stand-alone. Thank you to my beta Alex/welshdevondragon for polishing this story! :)
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 1: Going Home

I'm new here at mugglenet, but I read Killer Instincts, and I loved it. I can't wait to see what this has in store. My own story, The Potters and The Next Great Dilemma has not been validated yet, but, will you tell me what you think when it comes out? Besides from Secret Lily, you are my favorite fan fiction author. Great job so far!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed KI so much and I assure you that you'll enjoy this one equally. :) I'll be happy to check out your story once it's up. Just let me know and I'll go right there and read it. I'm flattered by your review. Thank you so much for being WAY's first reviewer!

I Wouldn't Change A Thing by The_Real_Hermione

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Brothers were strange creatures.

For as long as Lily can remember, there has been a gap between her and James which she never felt with Albus. When Lily is kidnapped, will James prove her wrong?

A story about the discovery of what family really means.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 11/14/10 Title: Chapter 1: If You Disappear

I love it. It shows a different side of the family than most Next Gen. Fics. However, I do think that the age spacing is wrong. I was under the impression from the epilouge that James and Albus were only a year apart, and Lily was two years apart from Albus. However, I may be wrong. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes someone else said I got the spacing wrong... I'm not sure, I don't remember there being anything specific in the Epilogue... I thought it said James was starting third year and Albus starting first, so I sort of played around with their ages a bit. But maybe it's not entirely canon. Anyway, thanks for reviewing :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes someone else said I got the spacing wrong... I'm not sure, I don't remember there being anything specific in the Epilogue... I thought it said James was starting third year and Albus starting first, so I sort of played around with their ages a bit. But maybe it's not entirely canon. Anyway, thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 11/14/10 Title: Chapter 2: I Promise

I love it, but, what is Violet's last name? And, how can she see threstrals?

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing this chapter as well! I didn't think Violet's last name was particularly relevant... and I haven't given her one. She's not necessarily related to any canon characters, she could be, but I don't think it really matters. I haven't put in the backstory of how she can see Thestrals - in my mind it was one of her grandparents dying from some sort of disease, but I didn't include it. I might look over that section again and put it in. thanks for reviewing!!!

Ginny Weasley and the Deathly Hallows by fizzingwizzbee

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is the untold story of Ginny Weasley through her sixth year at Hogwarts. Harry has vanished on a secret mission taking Hermione and Ginny's brother, Ron with him. Ginny is left with no choice but to try and keep life going as normally as posible, but it would seem life has other ideas.
Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 12/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Seven Potters

I think it is great that you are covering Ginny's story. I've always wondered what happened to her. I hope you go a little past the battle, because those nineteen years between the end of the seventh book and the epilouge puzzle me! Keep it up!

Author's Response: I plan to go a little beyond the last chapter of the book but not by much. I'll mostly explore the aftermath of the war. It'll likely be no more than 3 chapters I reckon. This fic is going to be a long project for me, could easily take beyond a year to get it all written. Glad you've enjoyed the first chapter. Keep reading a reviewing! -Fizzingwizzbee

The Other Potter by georgeisholey

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: My name is Rose Evans. My parents were Lily and James Potter, and Harry Potter is my twin brother, though he didn't know. I was raised by Severus Snape. This is my story.

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 06/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Truth About Me

This is great! Who would have thought to stop and think if Harry had a twin!!!! I can't wait to continue reading!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Apparently, I would stop and think of that. :)

Reviewer: iLuna17 Signed
Date: 06/22/11 Title: Chapter 2: In Hiding, BRB

Still awesome! I guess that soon brother and sister will re-unite? Will she be the one to defeat the dark lord? The mystery continues, also with the one how Sev could be a good father. Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Sev as a good father was interesting to write about for me. It gave me a whole new perspective of his character. As for the rest of your questions- well, "Don't count your owls before they are delivered." Thank you for reading and reviewing!