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06/12/06

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A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 08/18/06 Title: Chapter 26: Coming Out of It

Bumps! (And I'm from New York!)

Author's Response: \"Bumps?\" I\'m guessing it\'s a New Yorker thing. Haha.

From Abomination to Adoration by grape_2010

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What caused Lily to loathe James and James to loathe Lily? How did they come to fall in love? What bumps and bruises did they acquire along the way? From hexing to comforting, this is the way it all started. Endure dangers and hardships, perplexity and mind games, and matters of the heart.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 07/16/06 Title: Chapter 17: Shifted Winds, Turned Sails: A Changed Direction

Hey Danielle,it's Ashley. You're my beta. Wow! I never knew you wrote this! It's on my favorite stories list!

Author's Response: Hey Ash. I\'m glad you like my writing and my writing style; things might have gotten awkward between us otherwise. Thanx for the review. Looking forward to helping you improve. :)

Turning Saints Into the Sea by miss patil

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James Potter is running out of time to win the heart of Lily Evans. In a last attempt to make her his, he formulates a secret plan.

Will the whole thing blow up in his face? . . . Or will Lily have some secrets of her own?

Warnings: Excessive amounts of romance, jealousy, and PMS.

I'm a'comin with the newest chapter!!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 08/21/06 Title: Chapter 9: Hogsmeade Fun

Scary! James is a jerk in this chapter. Brandon seems so nice! I want a Brandon!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 05/30/07 Title: Chapter 13: Once

Love The title. OMg. James is sooo uber sweet.

Why Potter? by JaneA

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As the Marauders enter their seventh year, James has one goal: to get Lily Evans. Lily is just trying to stay away from him. Remus and Sirius are coming out with a plan. Will they all get what they want, or will they get back something completely unexpected?

Chapter seven is up!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/18/06 Title: Chapter 5: Confusion

poor sophie! Oh god, please don't say she gets with Snape!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! As to your question... please don\'t consider me rude if I don\'t answer it. :)

Life's An Hourglass by Connor Landon

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has a dark secret that will ultimately destroy her entire world. But only if Voldemort doesn't do it first...

This is the tale of James and Lily's struggle of love and life during the Time of Shadow--Voldemort's First War.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/18/06 Title: Chapter 5: It's In Your Face

Liar! Cheater! You cheated! You cheated! *stops yelling at Lily* Good job.*returns* Evil! You should've said yes!Don't walk away from me, lily!....

Author's Response: Yeah...cheated...

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/18/06 Title: Chapter 8: Crumbling Walls

Aha! So that's what that was all about! And as for all that stuff about snape...EWWWWWWWWW.

Author's Response: *sings off-key* I can see clearly now the rain is gone...

If I Ask You To by Aoide

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After a traumatic event in her life, Lily Evans has thrown away the key to the door to her past and all those who were part of it, including James Potter. Trying to forget everything, Lily has also forgotten who she is. She won't let anyone help her, especially James Potter. Could she find herself again? And if so, would she like what she sees?

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

You have got to be the best writer ever! I loved your story! I could not take my eyes off of it! The way you desribed lily's pain made me cry and the memories at the end were amazing! The end was so satisfying! Please never stop writing!

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Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: None

what the heck? This has to be the most random thing I've ever read. I epecially like the part where some girl broke up with him.

White Cotton Knickers by lucy3742

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short story set in the Marauder era. The boys prank Lily and she is not the least bit amused. A glimpse into a day at Hogwarts, Marauder style.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: White Cotton Knickers

I liked the end! Through the whole story I was wondering what happened to Lily's underwear and now I know!

Revenge is a Dish Best Served to a Weasley by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: SEQUEL TO TRUTH BE TOLD. After the events of the day Hogwarts' pumpkin juice had been spiked with truth potion, Hermione vowed revenge. Many students were still under it's effects, even after it should have worn off. Hogwarts' most famous pranksters should have know better than to mess with Hermione Granger. She was about to show them that revenge is a dish best served to a Weasley.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

They never learn do they?

Her Hero by Kbpkrissy

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: As another full moon dawns upon the Marauders and Lily Evans, things take a dramatic twist that threatens the well-being of the school.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really love this! James and Lily are so sweet together and James takes such good care of her! PMSP

Author's Response: He is so sweet and I love him like this! I\'m so glad you like it! :D

Everything About You by JC_Cainstone

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has just about everything to deal with. James Potter, NEWTS revision, James Potter, annoying friends, James Potter, song writing for the "Cheer Up" Christmas Ball and James Potter are just a few of them.
It was only natural that she should put off the song-writing until the very last minute.
Sitting by the fire of the Gryffindor common room, she searches desperately for inspiration. Her eyes land on James Potter. She begins to write...

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 06/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Everything About You

I love the song and I love how James falls off his chair.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks, I like that bit too...that might be why I wrote it...sorry, I\'m in a weird mood at the moment! Thanks for the review!

A Cauldronful of Lessons by Hallie Black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: SEQUEL OF LESSONS: After successfully completing their Herbology project, Lily finds out from her ex-partner James Potter that the two of them have been paired together to work on a new Potions assignment as well. How will Lily react when she realises that after having spent one whole month in James’s company yet another four weeks await her with the same task? And, moreover, will they be able to finish this assignment with out killing each other first?

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 08/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Can you believe it?

I read your profile. There's a really awesome story about Sirius being alive. It actually makes perfect sense. The Marauder’s Tale: A Different Kind of Magic by mugglemom122

Imperfections by some_kinda_superstar

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Lily has a secret. Afraid of her secret being revealed, she locks herself away behind a mask of perfection. What will it take for her to realise no-one is perfect?

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 07/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Imperfections

It jumps around a tad too quickly, I think, but it was well written...Wow, don't I sound stuck up? Okay, I loved it, you caught me.

Author's Response: thank you! no, you don\'t sound stuck up at all!

The Inverted Boggart... Strikes Again by Perselus

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The second addition to "The Inverted Boggart" story. Hermione finds herself in the most unusual situation with Snape, when facing a Boggart that turns into people's deepest desire, instead of their deepest fear. HG/SS

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 07/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow....

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

When the Cat's Away by fawkes_07

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The young ladies of 5th-year Potions are called out for a 'special class,' leaving the boys without their genteel influence. That calls for a special lesson.

This is a Book 5, Harry/Draco short fic that is not meant for younger or saner readers.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

I agree, It so sick, yet I can't look away.Lol. Waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I finally got some good feedback on how to get it validated--have to tone it down a lot, sorry, but it\'ll still be hilarious. If the queue ever comes back up..

James's Sketchbook by Houlestar

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily placed the violin on the floor, the sorrowful song only added to her misery. She could still feel Snape’s kiss on her mouth, and wondered why she had done such a thing. Looking up at the doorway she saw James standing there, and a new emotion filled her, something she hadn’t felt before...

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 05/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOOOO,. She's modeling for him huh?*nugdes suggestively*. Just kidding... sort of. Is this your first fic? It's really good.

525,600 Minutes by MarauderWannabe

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A fear of commitement drives Lily away. Circumstance gives them another chance, but old friends could be there end. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans, the year after Hogwarts. Excerpt from the new chapter:

He doesn’t want you to kiss him, she told herself rationally.
“No p-,” she started
Guess not.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: We Don't Want To Talk About It!

Lily had to use every ounce of self-control in her to keep from taking the picture from its home and tearing it into a thousand pieces

Falling Like the Rain by MistressofMagic

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter are attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry for their 7th and final time, and things are finally starting to get interesting...well...more interesting.
James thinks he loves Lily, Lily thinks she hates James, but what will happen when Lily starts to get jealous and James suffers an enormous loss?
Tears and hearts may fall like the rain, but eventually the sun will come out, as it always does.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421 Signed
Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: What Have We Here?

UPDAAAAATE! Please? Pretty please!

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