That was amazing! I seriously can't think of even one bad thing to say, that's how great it was...Wow! The ending was so hilariously cute! Haha, in my case, that's a good thing.

~Sammie

Wow. Just - wow.

I don't normally read poetry on MNFF (I prefer to write it ;)), but when you left me a review I decided to read one of your poems, and since Lily is one of my favorite characters, I read this one first. And I must say, I'm so glad I chose to read this.

I don't even know what I love so much about your poem, but I love it anyway. Maybe it's Lily's love for Harry, maybe it's the fact that she seems to know what's going to happen, maybe it's that she trusts her friends yet she's not idealistic enough to think that nothing will go wrong. Whatever it is, this poem is amazing, and I'm soooo glad I decided to read it. It's going on my favorites list right now. :)

~Sammie

Author's Response: *hugs her Sammie* Thank you for the lovely review dear! :) This was one of the poems that I wrote on a spur of the moment thing, and then decided to finetune. I like it because it\'s short and sweet yet I think that my message of Lily\'s protective love over her son has shown through. Lily I think, was a careful mother and though she wanted everything to be perfect I think that she knew that there was a chance that things wouldn\'t end up that way.

Anyway, thanks for the review! ~Suzie

Aw, I feel so special. :)

Lol, but back to the story. I loved Lily's comment about Dudley! 'Little? He was huge!' It was soo funny how she thought she was talking about her sister's father-in-law, but she was really insulting her nephew!

What's gonna happen next? Is James going to try out for the Quidditch team? I bet Hermione is going to figure out their secret. She can be too smart for her own good, sometimes. What's going to happen in the Forbidden Forest? Is it going to be the full moon? Are they going to meet Werewolf!Remus?

Sorry for all the questions... I can't wait for an update!

~Sammie

Author's Response: Hahahah! Thanks! 1. That\'s a surprise. 2. No. It\'s sort of cliché. 3. Yes, Hermione will figure it out. ;) 4. Wait and see. 5. Nope. 6. Possibly. Thanks so much, Sammie!

Author's Response: I meant, they might meet Remus later in the story in werewolf form.

Dude, that's perfect! I was thinking of making you a prefect in the third chapter, so fifteen is like...whoa! Haha
I'm fifteen too, and obviously, my name is Sammie :)

Author's Response: Haha, okay. Awesome! You shall be a prefect too. Cool!

I don't trust Terry.... I feel like he's lying to Lily. His methods of stalling were funny though. :)

Very good so far! I can't wait to see what happens next...

~Sammie

Author's Response: lol, he is sweet in his own way, I guess. And we will find out more soon enough...thanks so much! Gin_Drinka

YES! I got a Double Dare! And an exciting one, at that. *dances*
I feel bad for Lily, since she failed that test and didn't even get any points for it. But at least she proved she's not a coward, so something good came of it.
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Keep up the good work.
~Sammie

Author's Response: Yeah, poot Lily. Nothing really seems to go her way in this story, does it? Thanks for all the compliments

First, I just want to say that Blenkinsop Waterbut (the name, not the person) always makes me laugh so hard that I almost fall out of my chair! :D

Okie dokie, now on to real review:
Wow, what a twist! I definitely did not expect Cissy (or Draco) to be dead! I'm happy for her though. Now she gets to be reunited with her family, and she's come to terms with everything.
The thing that I love about this story is that I got to see another side of Narcissa. I mean, sure, in HBP there are a few scenes that show her softer side, and that she cares for her son, but here I can actually understand what she's feeling.
Also, I loved that she was blaming Harry for everything. Obviously, not everyone is in love with him and praises him, but she outright hates him. I found that to be an interesting change from what I normally read.
One last thing, I promise! It's about Severus. It was so sweet how she considered him part of their family. In the books, it doesn't seem like there's anyone who truly loves him and cares for him. In his memories we saw that he had an abusive father and a mother who couldn't really take care of him, but here I saw that he actually had a family. Maybe not a biological family, but a family that loved him and cared for him. It was nice to read that Narcissa had sort of taken him in as a brother to her and Lucius, and un uncle-type thing for Draco. :)

Keep up the great work!
~Sammie

Author's Response: *dances around in utter happiness* You are the second person who didn\'t predict Narcissa\'s end. I was so worried that I over-did the foreshadowing. I am so happy that I didn\'t.

Oh, and as for Blenkinsop Waterbut, my biggest problem was spelling his name. I copy and pasted it every time. :D

I think Narcissa has a good heart, but her hatered for Harry is very sensible. He\'s not a big fan of her either. But she has a right to hate him. He was involved in one way or another with almost every horrible thing that happened to her family. And as she mentioned, if he had just died as a baby, things probably would have been a lot better for her family. Maybe a lot worse for most of the world, but she\'s really only concerned with her family. And in this particular story Harry has also killed Lucius, so I really feel that her hatered is justified.

As for Severus, I do believe that Narcissa and Draco care about him a lot. It seemed natural to me that Narcissa would consider him family.

Thanks so much for the review. I\'m really glad you liked the story!

Just dropping by to say that I really love your story. It's one of the most in-depth and detailed fics I've ever read, and it's obvious you put a lot of hard work into it. I especially love the way you portrayed the Prime Minister, it's fits perfectly with Jo's characterization of him. Another favorite part of mine was the final battle. Harry tricking Voldemort into killing himself is one of the best theories I've heard so far, and it's a genious way for Voldemort to die without making Harry a murderer. This has been on my favorites list since the beginning, and I'm looking forward to any other stories you may write in the future.
Keep up the amazing work!
Sammie

Aww, Suzie, this is amazing! *tear* It's so fluffly, yet so...not...the perfect combination. I've always thought Remus and Tonks were cute together (well, since HBP anyways), but you just took it to a whole new level.
How do you come up with amazing plot bunnies like these? Do they, like, attack you when you're sleeping or something? Sheesh.
:) What I mean to say in my usual babbling, is that this is an amazing story, and it had better win some sort of prize!
Much

Author's Response: Sammie! Thanks for the review! *hugs* I don\'t usually do \'fluff\' at all, but thought I\'d give it a go...this is my first RL/NT story too...hmmm *hides*

As for plot bunnies, sometimes I just sit down with a teeny idea and just type. Muahahaha
~Suzie xx

Wow! Minnie McGonagall is a Death Eater, who knew?

I like Mr. Deathly, he seems suave, in an old, not-really-alive type way.

Anyways, great first chapter to DH! It's great how it had a serious tone and mood, but still makes everyone laugh. I really hope you continue this after the challenge is over. :)

~Sammie

Author's Response: That\'s the best description of anyone I\'ve ever read... \"suave in an old, not-really-alive type way.\" I\'m glad you like it!