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09/27/06

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I love...who? by Hermiones_Revenge

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry writes a love note to one person...but someone else recieves it and gets the wrong idea. From here, confusion and chaos come about. Who is really sending the notes? Who really likes who? What is going on?!

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 11/20/06 Title: Chapter 8: I can see clearly now (sort of)

i really liked that story... very funny (ive read funnier but hey, wat can u expect) anyway, l really liked how this story was so twisted and everything... confusing... but really gets u thinking

Too Sweet to Remember by Canadian Confessional

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

that story was soooo good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!!!

A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 43: Even More Detentions

wow... this is really wierd: i dont like ur ... i dunno wat i dont like ... but theres sumthing about this story that i dont like ... but im addicted. thats skill! (take this as a compliment). so, keep those chapters cuming!!! o yea, sumthing i rely like about u is that u neva take all 2 long 2 update. i gotta luv that in a fanfic story! so... next chapter please!

Author's Response: HAHAHA. I will take that as a compliment, thank you. And if you ever figure out what it is, tell me. Please. I never take to long to update? Huh...I don\'t know about that. Granted, it\'s not months, but it\'s not a short time either. But, thanks anyways!

Cliché Nation by just_the_contrary

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A compilation of the most commonly used Harry Potter clichés in the fandom. Features Angsty!Harry, Sweet!Draco, Head Dorms, sudden romances in the forms of Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny and of course, Draco/Hermione, because what's a cliché without them?

The Marauders also make an appearance in this fic, including Lily/Lily's best friend/Lily's other best friend.

Warning: mention of hippopotamuses inside.

Chapter Five is up! The story is done. Also, thank you to everyone who nominated this neatly tied bundle of ridiculousness in the QQ awards, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 10/01/06 Title: Chapter 5: Bring Me to Life

that story was so good. i couldn't stop laughing!

Author's Response: Thank you.

The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my ~~bonkers~~ beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my ~~evil and malicious~~ extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I ~~make a fool out of myself at every opportunity~~ am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of ~~cliquey~~ lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the ~~sarcastic cynic~~ also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? ~~Of course not~~ Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. ~~I have no idea how it happens~~ It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

~~Read this or I’ll curse you~~ Read this and I’ll love you!

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 06/15/07 Title: Chapter 14: Hogsmeade Has A Sweet Shop. How Can It Be Bad?

i luv this story... probably cos its different... 1 more chapter!!! aw thats 2 bad, i was rely enjoying it... neway, get it up soon cos wanna no wat happens

Author's Response: It\'s in the queue as we speak ... thanks for reviewing!

What Could Have Been by Lucia_Swanne

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This follows Ron and Hermione 10 years after school.

When Hermione doesn't turn up for the group's ten year reunion at Hogwarts, Ron becomes suspicious about why Hermione is too busy to be there. But what he discovers is beyond what he ever imagined.

After seeing each other again nine years later, can Ron and Hermione find the love they shared once again?

NOTE: THIS STORY IS NOT ENTIRELY COMPLETED. IT IS TEMPORARILY STOPPED, BUT WILL BE RETURNED TO IN THE FUTURE.

Categories: Ron/Hermione
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Words: 18575 | Hits: 55770 | Published: 08/30/06 | Updated: 08/24/08
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Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 7: Secrets and Lies

omg! how could they give poor ron all those hints but not tell him nething? we all kno how slow he can b ...(but i stil luv him)...wen wil he find out the truth (that us ASTUTE readers knew about from the beginning..hehehe i used a big word...) neway.....its rely good so keep up the good work and keep updating and dont let the staff giv u ne BS ;) luv rhet:) ps. i kno..i actually finally read it... lol, soz it took a while...

Author's Response: *giggles* Thanks for finally reading this, Rhet!! And I\'m very proud of your big words!! The truth is not far off, I promise you!! Thanks for reading darling!! :D

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Precious Time

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nah, u wont kill her... i kno u... i think...
stil, waiting 4 the next chappie
oh yea, btw, ur great!

Author's Response: enough !\'s rhet?? lol random...and although you know me very well, no one knows if i will kill her but me...and that\'s the way it will stay until that chappie comes up...:D Thanx 4 reading, luv!!

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 08/25/08 Title: Chapter 10: Memories Run Deep

Oooo cliffhanger! How many chapters are you going to have of memories? Because, I mean, they can get a bit draining if it goes on and on over too many chapters, but I suppose you know that...
Umm... yeah, it was really good! But, of course it was, because it's you ;) Wow this really has to get me back into reading fanfic... my bad.
Dammit Swanne! Why the cliffhangers! Ok, ok, so I know why... but that doesn't make them any less annoying!
Hopefully I will be notified of your next chapter update (stupid mnff glitches)... which will be soon?? *hint hint*

Author's Response: The memories wont drag on, I promise! Thanks a lot for reviewing, Rhet, it means a lot that you still read this despite my inability to update regularly. And I must say I'm glad that I helped integrate you back into the world of fanfic, welcome back! I've also found a lot of people don't like my cliff-hangers, pity there's going to be so many more of them (hehe). And yes, I'm getting the hint- update really soon! I will as soon as I've finished the chapter (yes, it's finally gotten to the point where I'm writing for the update! shock horror!) Thanks for reading!! :D

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Shattered Hearts

wow. well, i haven't read fanfic in a while, as you know, but i'll try to review properly anyway ;)
i loved your characterisation. you know what some stories can be like, but it was really good!
that's a sneaky cliffhanger, you know. i mean, it doesn't look like it's meant to be a cliffhanger, but here i am really wanting to know what's going to happen next... so get the next chapter up asap!

Author's Response: haha thanks for your review hun, and I appreciate you doing it properly, very nice indeed!! Thanks for getting around to me, and I\'m glad you like the questionable cliffhanger!! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for reading, lovely!! :D

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 03/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: After All These Years

oooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
whos the dad? whos the dad????
he he he
yay u finally got it up! yay!
its rely good - as usual
get the next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Rhet, you are totally insane, but I still love you...besides, you already know who the dad is, you guessed when you were over at my house...and yes, I\'m so happy it\'s up! thanks for the comment!! :P

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 2: In The Shadows

yay!!!
go lucia! u & ur great english skills! (hehe had 2 put it in there). PLEASE please please give us chapter 3!!!!!!! as soon as possible!!!!! or ill hunt you down and steal it off u!!! i promise!!

luv rhet
ps. go the rasmus

Author's Response: LOL! Rhet you are crazy! You will get the 3rd chapter soon enough, i promise! And i will not let you steal it! ps. THE RASMUS ROCK! (as do nightwish and yellowcard and everyone else I love)

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Reviewer: Rhet Signed
Date: 05/15/07 Title: Chapter 7: Sixteenth detention...and the day I was hospitalized in hell

next chapter! next chapter! next chapter!
i luuuuuuuv this story
keep 'em cumin!

Author's Response: Aww. I\'m so glad you like! I\'ll have the next one up as soon as I can.