aah! lavender is so evil!

hmmm... that was well written! i'm just not so sure about the are we together now? yes we are part... it seemed slightly out of character - but keep writing! i'm going to read the sequel!

ahhh, well i am reading this after it is already finished!! but if i had to wait for an update, i dont think i could stand the suspense! keep updating!

cliffie extrordinaire. keep up the great writing! i love the irony of the last line - ginny might die but they still won the battle.

i know that it is probably too late to offer my opinion but i will still say that it would be a good idea for this fic to be in the R/Hr and H/G category!

Gotta keep reading!!!! i actually have absolutely NO clue how this will end!!!!!!!

wow. that was a spectacular fic. you kept my absolute attention to the very end. if you only received runner-up as best romance fic, I bet the competition was very close. i wish i could write like you! I look forward to reading your other fics! congratulations again!

great fic!! you are an amazing writer! i can't wait to keep reading!

wow crazy cliffie!! amazing fic!!! and for the 8th time, gotta keep reading!

awesome. very cute. i love when ron knocks down the door - i could picture it!

oh man, you're trying to send me over the edge. haha! no joke, i was checking my email and i saw a mugglenet fanfiction update and i when i opened it and saw the title i seriously, in the middle of comtech, totally went OMG OMG OMG!! no joke.
and i read it right then and there. and you're trying to drive me crazy again with your crazy writing skills! i've waited till now to review cuz i want to give you another customary long one! :-)

1. Hermione was a mishap?!?! a MISHAP?!?! ok, so everyone's probably driving you crazy about this one. and then there's this crazy if ron and claudia are really happy together, do i really want to see them hurt. but then, NO! ron and hermione have to be together!!

wait, that made like no sense. moral of the story is, it looks like ron is starting to get over hermione just when she's starting to think about him again cuz michael's jerkness has finally been revealed. AAAAAAAAAAAHH! CONFLICT!!!

2. Michael's jerkness.
YAY! the big revelation was kind of last chapter but i'm happy Hermione is not changing her "i hate michael, why was i so stupid" stance. so yay!
so, in english we were discussing how some people change for the better after they've commited a murder or a really serious crime. That sparked a huge debate about even though some people change, those people still have a bit of 'badness' in them. Like, if they commited a murder out of revenge, they felt 'good' about it after. And, even if they regret their actions later, they still felt that 'goodness' at one time.
SOO that's how i feel about the whole Michael thing. yes, he turned for the better after jane was born. but that does NOT change the fact that he was cheating on Hermione while they were married! while she was in the hospital!!! no. it'd be different if he was a cheater before he married, but no. i personally feel that he should be put in "jail for life" as we would say in english class. in other words, not be allowed to see hermione/jane again without express permission. i know that seems harsh, but he knew the consequences before he cheated and he took advantage of Hermione. so good bye michael. (and of COURSE there's no i want ron and hermione to be together ulterior motive... ;-) )

3. “Hermione,” said Ginny softly, “Michael’s had an accident.”

*sigh* boy when you throw a curve ball, you really strike out. :-P WHAT is Hermione going to do??? she's too good of a person just to not care and let him suffer. wait.... maybe hermione will feel like it's her fault michael got in an accident and get back together with him out of guilt!! NOOO!!!! OMG usually i have some sort of speculation, but not this time!

4. Update soon. or else ;-) just kidding :D but when you do, you can be sure of another MASSIVE review like this one and screaming in tech class!!

5. Conclusion!! So, as I've said countless times, you are a spectacular writer. a lot of times in other fics, i can guess what's going to happen before it does. but with you I have no idea!! what are ron's real feelings for hermione? what will he do if hermione tells him she loves him again? what will happen to claudia? how far have she and ron gone? what happened to michael? will michael and hermione ever make up? how will hermione react to michael's accident? will ginny ever tell hermione that she knew about michael cheating all along? how will hermione react to that information? where does harry come in to all this? will there EVER be a happily ever after for ron and hermione????

omg. you drive me crazy. but that's why i love this fic SOOOOOOOO much! keep up the STELLER, GREAT, and SUPERB work!!

I'm on tenterhooks until you update again! ;-
Always, Kat.

Author's Response: I'm so so so so happy. Really. No one has ever done this before. I feel very flattered, and I hope you don't get kicked out of tech class for screaming. I LOVE LONG REVIEWS. I, like, adore them. Thanks for taking the time to write all of this!

1. No, no one's mentioned the mishap.

2. I actually like Michael. (I'm kinda in love with him.) I think he's made some mistakes but he finally realized he's been an ass. Oh, and I feel the need to clarify this: Michael WAS cheating before they got married.

3. I have no idea how I came up with that one. But I know it's hard to predict what's going to happen, and that makes me really happy!!

4. I'll try to update as soon as possible. I'm hoping I will get another one of your massive reviews.

5. Again, thanks so much for this. REALLY. :)