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06/27/07

Hi! I'm Alyssa, and I'm 16. I'm a busy sophomore. Harry Potter is my default "homework-break." I love to write, and I'm currently obsessed with the Next Generation. JKR is a genius for giving us all these characters so conducive to fanfiction. :)

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A Prelude to Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs by Tintalle

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short piece of history that explains how three of the four marauders (James, Sirius, and Peter) came to be animagi--or rather, how they got the idea. (slightly AU)

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: .x.

good story! keep up the good work!

Ronald Ebenezer Scrooge Weasley by JoWannabe

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On Christmas Eve, Ron is shown the error of his ways by four ghosts. Will he learn his lesson before it is too late?

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/20/07 Title: Chapter 5: It's Not Too Late

Awww, I loved it! Your story was very well written.

Where Do We Go From Here? by ColorOfAngels

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a one shot that has been floating around my mind since before the release of HBP so it is slightly AU but that doesnt affect anything......... Hermione is having a bad day...when Ron takes notice can he do anything to help?

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Where Do We Go From Here?

This was fairly well written, though it had typos. Ah, well.

Everywhere by harry_potter_star

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:

Lily Evans has never particularily liked James Potter, but when she decides to look at him in a different light, she may change her mind... One shot song-fic, based on the song Everywhere by Michelle Branch.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 09/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Everywhere

Good story, but it could use a bit more revision. Consider a beta next time.

Merry Christmas, Love by Foxy Wolf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It’s Christmas Eve 1979. James and Lily Potter are getting ready to celebrate Christmas with their closest friends in Godric’s Hollow. They spend the entire day putting up decorations and preparing the feast. After a hard day’s work they decide to enjoy a cup of tea and exchange gifts in their sitting room, but Lily has more than one gift to share with her husband.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Eve

Awww, cute story! Some paragraphs were a bit long, though. I think you should definitely keep writing! I like your style.

Author's Response: Thank you very much =D

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Eve

Awww, cute story! Some paragraphs were a bit long, though. I think you should definitely keep writing! I like your style.

Author's Response: and again

A Time For Change by SPEW010

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As Harry begins to try to put his life back together, He starts to spend more time with friends of all ages, particularly Ginny and Tonks. After spending quite a lot of time with her, he begins to think that something isn't quite right. What is going on?!

Chapter Three has been submitted. Stay tuned!

I'm sorry, but I'm not currently working on this fic. I don't have time right now. I'm sorry if I've disapointed people. I hope to get it back up and running soon.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 06/18/08 Title: Chapter 2: Aunt Petunia's Transformation

I like this story so far and am sad to hear that you aren't working on it anymore! Update, please!

The Trouble with Mistletoe by Crystallic Rain

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily decides to invite James along to one of Slughorn's Christmas parties, immediately deciding it was a huge mistake. Everything seems to go wrong, especially when Lily is caught off guard by the thing she hates most: mistletoe.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Trouble with Mistletoe

This was a well-written story, if rather short. Good job.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Trouble with Mistletoe

This was a well-written story, if rather short. Good job.

Sonnets for Voldemort by Flobberworm93

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A collection of sonnets that would be very, very fun to read to Voldy, that is, if you don't mind the getting killed part. If you don't know, a sonnet is a short fourteen-line poem that takes less than thirty seconds to read. I know. I timed myself. It's great for people with short attention spans. If you have a really short attention span, read a haiku.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Doomed

"Ah, music!" (erm...poetry...)
I swear, Dumbledore has a quote for everything!

Author's Response: Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak!

The Auction by KASK

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Every Christmas Eve there is a dinner for the most prominent wizards, where dancing partners are auctioned off. Not only is Lily Evans forced into going to this auction, but because of a practical joke, she’s up for auction! But, thanks to a black-haired boy, the night may not be so bad…

This will be three chapters

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/20/07 Title: Chapter 3: Lily's Savior

Aww, sweet story. Very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Castle On A Cloud by ColorOfAngels

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One shot song fic to Castle on a Cloud from Les Miz... Its a cold Christmas Eve for a six year old Harry Potter...

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, poor little Harry! The only thing I was confused about was the way you had the Dursleys treating him like a house elf. I wouldn't think Petunia would trust a six year old, especially an "abnormal" one to cook meals or steam-clean furniture. Other than that, it was a really good story!

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 04/21/08 Title: Chapter 12: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

That was inexcusable. I just read the whole story...and I thought it would be finished. Obviously, it's not. Not that I'm not eager to read more. Quite the opposite actually. I just wish there were more NOW so I wouldn't have to wait. Please update soon. I will read more, for sure. Lily is so clueless. Well I shouldn't bore you with my insanity any longer. So, I'll just go...now...and wait...in misery...til the next chappie is posted. Please excuse my randomness, I'm superly tired at the moment.

Author's Response: Hey, aren\'t you Alyssa? You\'re in Hufflepuff! Ha, I recognize you! Lol, thanks so much for the hilarious review. Please don\'t be miserable on my account.

How Predictable! by HPwizzzard

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The Marauders are having their first Divination lesson, and they quickly realize what a waste of time it is. In order to liven things up, Siriusmakes a few predictions without the aid of tea leaves. Obviously, he's no Seer, because there's no way James and Lily will ever get married, Peter will become an evil minion, or Remus will fall for Sirius' baby cousin... right?

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: How Predictable!

Brilliant, absolupotivily brilliant! I loved it! You made it seem realistic...ish...because Sirius was totally joking when he was talking about their futures. I loved your characterisation of all the people. The Marauders never would've guessed what was in store for them.

Of Christmas Past by Chaser921

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find themselves in a Muggle hotel in Godric's Hollow on the Winter Solstice. During an enthusiastic snowball fight, Harry and Ginny step through a stone circle that transports them seventeen years into the past. This may be the only chance Harry has to spend with his parents, and it may also be what he needs to figure out his relationship with Ginny.

The warning is for later chapters.

Edit: So, this was originally strictly a Harry/Ginny fic, but Ron and Hermione kept trying to get together too, so I felt like I had to change the category. And there's a bit of Lily/James in there too, though they're already married, and I've also added a bit of Remus/Tonks. Poor Sirius is the only Singleton (though he may manage to get a girl of his own)!

Edit: This story was cannon until after Deathly Hallows came out, so I changed it to Alternate Universe, but it's still pretty close to cannon. Only a few things will end up being different when the story ends.

Edit: I've changed all of the chapter titles to the titles of Christmas songs that I felt reflected the events in the chapters best. Tell me what you think! Does it fit?

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 10: O Come, All Ye Faithful

Great chapter, I love it! My favorite part is Lily's curse on James. I can so see her doing that. Update quickly please!

Wednesday Dates by belladonna_tb

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Whoever knew that a couple still went on "dates" after they were married?

:::old H/G:::

Runner-Up in the Best Canon Romance category of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Awards

For those interested, I'm planning on writing a Prequel to this story. Just thought I'd let everyone know.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, so sweet! This was wonderful!

Nothing Else by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Severus Snape has never been one to dream, or trust dreams. That is, until he has one involving Lily Evans. Something about this dream makes his wonder if it could happen, even if implausible. The only question is -- will it be too late to change the outcome?

I am Kask of Slytherin House. This is for the 'New Years Challenge: Dreams.'

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 09/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing Else

Oh, poor Severus! You always portray Snape so well. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Seasonal Suffering by DoraeAzure

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Hermione falls in love with her red-haired best friend, she comes to realize that holidays are no help at all. Features secret agent Hermione (theme song included!), semi-psychotic Ginny, smugly smirking Harry, Quidditch kit Ron, snowball fights, breaking and entering, presents, stolen clothes, owl poop, broken platters and a truly spectacular hexing of Malfoy.

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Girls' Day Gainsay

I like this story a lot. The only thing that confused me was that I got the feeling that Ginny and Hermione were actually angry at each other in the common room. Somehow I thought it was all supposed to be playful banter. But I can't wait to read the next chapter anyway.

Complete Faith in You by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: During the Battle of Hogwarts, almost all in the side of the Light fought for love.

And in the middle of the scurry and flurry and before the outright fury of the confrontation, Harry’s two best friends come upon their own piece of the revered word and its many-fold but meekest meaning.

Don’t let my artsy summary fool you. This is my one true pairing, pure and simple, and the events that just piled on top of each other leaving Hermione with no other inclination than to finally fling herself to Ron for that Kiss.
~Written as a present for Ginny Weasley Potter. Happy birthday, sis!

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 08/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Trusting Ron is Hermione's Undoing...and vice-versa.

great story! i love ron/hermione!

Author's Response: Thanks, alyssa! Me too!

The Flying Lesson by Hypatia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The Dark Lord pays Professor Snape a late night visit, with the intention of teaching Snape to fly.

Nominated for the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Best Humor Story!

Reviewer: Phoenix13 Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Flying Lesson

Haha, this was a hoot! You should write more humour!

Author's Response: If the plot bunny stirkes, I\'ll be sure to! Thanks for the review!

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