I ship fleur/kreacher.
OMG! I HAVE TICKETS TO HEAR JKR READ IN NYC! I AM GOING TO SEE JKR! I AM GOING TO HEAR HER READ! I AM MAKING MY DAD DRIVE 8 HOURS FOR A TWO HOUR READING! OMG!
hobbies: writing, talking, smiling, acting, drawing, reading, singing, filming, cooking, yelling, chewing gum, playing sims, speaking french, doing gymnastics, annoying my chorus teacher, browsing mugglenet, listening to green day, sitting in cafés, hanging out with friends, taking long baths, dying my hair, going to plays, reading fanfiction, pretending to have a british accent, emailing, hanging out with the "weasley" brothers, dancing, painting, shopping, procrastinating on homework, imagining what it would be like to be famous, and so much more. . .
about me: im thirteen and have wanted to be a writer since i was six, and wrote a play about two girls and an alien named "alien." it is a work of stunning brilliance, and if this world was at all fair, i would have won a pulitzer for it by now.
random fact: i hate subways, moths, raisins, and people who sneak up behind me (yes, i am talking to you, jeremy).
motto: never underestimate a flying garden gnome
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First off, I'd like to say thanks for reviewing my story. Now, on to yours: I think this is a good start. You, I am sure, are aware of this, but your characters are unbelievably OOC. That's what makes it so funny! 9/10
I love this!! Very clever and very funny! I found one type, but that was all. “No so well" should be "Not so well." Anyway, great job and you're on my favorites!
Oh my goodness, this is hilarious!! I don't think I've ever found a poem that I liked so much! Favorite line: Your happy lives are now in danger, and by the way, nice bottom Granger. Such pervy fun! And it rhymes so nicely; often these poems cheat here and there, but yours stays rhythmically even the whole time. So keep up the fab work, and this is on my faves!
Love it! Clever touch about the Oragomi (is that how you spell it?) files and such... you are very imaginative! I am looking forward to reading your other chapters as soon as I get the chance. I love fics that show a different side of Draco, and this looks very promising. 10/10!
This chapter is just as clever and beautiful as the first, but I have a few comments. First of all, in general I think you have portrayed an extremely accurate Hermione, but "Starlight" just doesn't seem like her at all. It seems a bit on the OOC side, and it's clichéd as well. Secondly, when Alicia says, ‘Wasn’t that Lestrange woman the one who killed Sirius Black?’ it seems like she should already know this. Wouldn't it have been in the papers, etc? And if not, surely Harry would have told people about Sirius' death. And even if he didn't tell them, I think it would be common knowledge by now. I mean, doesn't your story take place several years after Sirius' death? Other than those brief suggestions, I think this is a wonderful chapter. I love how you haven't made Draco some saint, but instead have tried to mix his good and bad qualities. He may be treating Harry and Ron and Hermione better, but he's still nasty to his House-Elf. And as Sirius Black himself says, you shouldn't judge a man by how he treats his equals, but by how he treats his inferiors. I am really enjoying this fic, and can't wait to read more! I'm not surprised you placed 3rd in the Book 7 Competition; you have an amazing amount of talent. 10/10 again!
Draco knows, doesn't he? He knows that the person Hermione is talking about is him?
Omg, I love it! This is hilarious! I would love to help you, but I can't see anything you could do better! Here, I'll go read the next chapters...
Author's Response: Thanks for R&Ring!
Another brilliant chapter! I love the way you describe the events of book 6 (Narcissa and Bellatrix coming to visit Snape, etc) except through Nagini's voice they sound completely ridiculous. Favorite line: 'You know, if it wasn't for the fact that Voldy could turn me into a belt (a very fashionable belt, I might add)'. . . I found one typo, but that was it: Right now I'm in the middle of packing for my torturous journey to keep an eye that spaz Wormtail. It should be 'keep an eye on that spaz Wormtail.' Anyway, congrats on another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the typo. I\'ll go and fix right away. :-)
Still lovin' it. It's like a cross between Harry Potter and the Georgia Nicolson series! Perhaps what you need is a change of scenery... you know, have Nagini go spy on Hogwarts for awhile; pay a visit to the Dursleys; go be an apprentice to Peeves, etc. The possibilites are endless. If you don't like any of those ideas, I'm happy to talk more about it with you. Good luck!
Author's Response: I like those ideas! Especially the Dursley and Hogwarts ones! :-) It might be a little while before I get to writing it, but when I do, I\'ll let you know where I post it. Apparently, I might night be able to get future chapters approved as it\'s written in a \"bullet-style\" format and it\'s frowned upon, I guess.
Congrats to you and Crimsonphoenix for getting rid of the plagerized story! I didn't think the mods were going to come through, and it was soooo unfair. So here's to the only Sirius-Black-is-a-babysitter story! *Applauds*
Author's Response: Thanks! *blushes* I really didn\'t think the mods were going to do anything about it either.
I e-mailed Crimsonphoenix to tell her the good news, and I\'m sure she\'s going to be ecstatic! :-D
Nooo! You can't be leaving the site! I love this story!! I completely understand why you're mad with the mods (I mean-- why won't they delete the plagerized story?) but know that we will all miss you terribly! If you ever post another chapter on this story, please contact me and tell me where I can find it, because I'd love to read more. Also, if you're still reviewing on Mugglenet, Chapter 3 of my story, Tall, Dark, and Handsome has been posted if you'd like to take a look. :)
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for understanding about me leaving. It\'s really for the best, I think. At least at the moment, anyhow. I\'ve talked to my co-author about continuing this story once before, but we\'re not sure if we\'re going to or not. We\'re both busy and all, but if something does come up and it does get written, you\'ll be the first to know. :-)
I\'d love to take a look at chapter 3 of your story. :-D
Scheherazade, I really like this story! I love the way you portray Sirius, because you make him seem like a good guy, but still a little irrisponsible (lol!) That whole thing about the "Babysitting Harry" story being like yours is really weird; why'd the mods accept it if it was plagerized? Anyway, if you have time to R&R my story, "Tall, Dark, and Handsome" I would love that. I guarantee, there's nothing about using a "jellyvision" in it! Lol! Great job, and a 10/10
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing! Crimsonphoenix helped me make Sirius that way, lol. Why the copied story got approved, I don't know. Maybe the mod who approved it was new and wasn't aware that there was already a story like it. Also, I'd love to take a look at your story. :-)
1st story in a series of Hermione/Draco one-shots (Check out my author page for more information)
Love it! Haha, I'm still not a fan of D/Hr, but this one is precious-- *image of Gollum pops into head*... er, wonderful. I was reading along and liking your story and everything, and then I got to the very last line and I was like "Omg, this is perfect! Why haven't I read this story before???" *Adds to favorites* You have a way with horribleness, Eilime. 10/10!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it even though your not a fan of the pairing, though this is actually such a story that you, and others with the same views, can read without screaming, "This pairing is SO not going to happen! Dream on!" Yes, it's been up for a long time, but I'm pleased that you came across it and took the time to read it now, then. Thank you for adding me to your favourites. It means a lot. And thank you for that compliment ;)
First off, thanks for reviewing my fic! Second of all (and far more importantly, I assure you) I think this is great! I think it's a shame more people don't read poetry. You're really talented.
Author's Response: No, no, my friend, thank YOU for being so kind. I am stuck in a twist trying to come up with a suitable story to wow you and all faithful citizens of Mugglenet, like an in-depth look at a secondary character. Have you any suggestions?
Thanks again,
Cherubim
Hey, I thought this was really good! I was intrigued because my sister's name is Cora, and I have never, ever, ever heard it used anywhere before. I think you have some very good ideas in here, though I think some of the writing is a bit choppy and uneven. If you made the scenes just a little bit longer, it might get rid of that. One mistake: "Andrew MacDounagh,” he told himself quietly, “You are the only person on Earth who could get lost inside a train. It’s a stationary object, for crying out loud.” Cute line, but trains are not in fact stationary objects. Lol. Overall great job, and I look forward to reading the rest of your chapters! 8/10 :)
Author's Response: OMG a new reviewer! yay! I\'ve never heard the name Cora used before either, it just sort of materialized inside my head one day. A fact I am not proud of: one of the kids I babysit for googled the name Cora Potter and there\'s a real person with that name. the thing I am not proud of: she\'s a convicted murderer. oops. and the thing about the train: I\'ve heard that a hundred times. What I meant was that the inside of the train was stationary: the compartments weren\'t all moving around or anything. it\'s just a straight shot all the way down, and hard to get lost in. But beleive me, Joe would be able to do it. Thanks for the really thourough review, I really appreciate the effort. I think that\'s the longest review I\'ve ever gotten! and also this is probably the longest response I\'ve ever written.
Hey, I thought this was really good! I was intrigued because my sister's name is Cora, and I have never, ever, ever heard it used anywhere before. I think you have some very good ideas in here, though I think some of the writing is a bit choppy and uneven. If you made the scenes just a little bit longer, it might get rid of that. One mistake: "Andrew MacDounagh,” he told himself quietly, “You are the only person on Earth who could get lost inside a train. It’s a stationary object, for crying out loud.” Cute line, but trains are not in fact stationary objects. Lol. Overall great job, and I look forward to reading the rest of your chapters! 8/10 :)
Author's Response: double post... hee-hee...
This is very good! I love James/Lily almost as much as I love Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, and Fleur/Kreacher. Anyway, there were a few typos, but nothing too bad: -- "He smiled and hugged his Mum." The 'mum' doesn't need to be capitalized. -- "The handprint hadn't gone away from three days." I think you mean for three days. Anyway, you might want to change those two, but I think your basic story is really good. Love all the descriptions; 10/10.
First off, let me thank you for reviewing my story Tall, Dark, and Handsome and putting it on your faves. I think this poem is really good, and I sympathize with how difficult it is to get reviewers. People just don't read enough poetry! Anyway, my favorite stanza (is that what they're called?) is:
It's so funny, because in your Author's Profile you apologize for "flaming" people (or something like that), but the review you gave me was so sweet! I feel very flattered. Anyhooo... why am I here? Oh yes, because I'm supposed to be reviewing your story: very good job!! I like that you show the other, less confident, side of Lily. It makes me like her so much more! I hope to be able to read your other chapters soon, when I have the time. Great job! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, flying_garden_gnome... I wrote that in my profile a very long time ago, before realizing that constructive crit was socially acceptable on Mugglenet, unlike some other sites. Thanks for the compliments- characterization isn't my strong point, and I'm glad you said you liked how I characterized Lily. Thanks for the review again!
Hey, I just wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, so I came to check out yours. I am pleased to say (as I hate leaving bad reviews) that I really like this a lot! It is a very intriguing idea, using a character that none of us really know at all, because there can be many more twists and turns in this character's past. Speaking of which, I'm dying to find out what has happened to make Bruno such an odd 8-year old (the low voice, etc.) I love the way you put such detail into everything you describe (from the bucket swinging in his hands to the clearing of his dishes), and wonder if perhaps you could put a bit more of that into your dialogue. I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, but some of it seems a bit spare and unrealistic (mainly when Brunhilda talks.) Overall, this was a very strong and well-written first chapter and it makes me want to read the next chapters as soon as possible! I really hope this review was helpful, and that you don't get bummed by the lack of reviews. :)