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The Ghost of Godric Gryffindor by GoG

Rated: •
Summary: At the start of Harry’s sixth year, the wizarding world is falling further under Voldemort’s evil control. Fudge has declared a draconian State of Emergency, but he is little more than Lucius Malfoy’s corrupt puppet. But when Malfoy seeks to impose Voldemort’s racist Pureblood ideology upon Hogwarts - the last bastion of the Light - the students rise up in revolt.

The spirits of the great Witches and Wizards of the Light, fearful for the future of the Wizarding world, send Harry and his friends a powerful ally, to help them in the desperate struggle to save Hogwarts and the wizarding world from impending darkness.

An epic struggle of Good against political corruption, racism, elitist ideology ... and Ultimate Evil. The roller-coaster plot twists and turns into the past and future – and Nightmare Realities, where the terrible consequences of failing to stop Voldemort are chillingly revealed.

A story to fascinate the intelligent reader ... philosophy, politics, time-travel, romance, humour ... and a few very cunning ideas.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: Chapter 21: Halloween 1981

OMG I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm gonna be checking back every 1/2 hour to see if it's there yet! OMG That was an awesome chapter! Awesome story!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 02/08/05 Title: Chapter 11: Séances and Interrogations

Awesome story!! Can't wait to finish it!

A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 3: Back at Hogwarts

I love James' reference to the future S.P.E.W! Funny

Author's Response: I had to add that it. I couldn\'t resist. Hehe.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

I love the story! James and Lily are adorable together!

Author's Response: I\'m glad. I think they\'re cute together too.

Turning Saints Into the Sea by miss patil

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: James Potter is running out of time to win the heart of Lily Evans. In a last attempt to make her his, he formulates a secret plan.

Will the whole thing blow up in his face? . . . Or will Lily have some secrets of her own?

Warnings: Excessive amounts of romance, jealousy, and PMS.

I'm a'comin with the newest chapter!!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 7: Bimbos and Awapuhi Shampoo

I love this story

Why Potter? by JaneA

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As the Marauders enter their seventh year, James has one goal: to get Lily Evans. Lily is just trying to stay away from him. Remus and Sirius are coming out with a plan. Will they all get what they want, or will they get back something completely unexpected?

Chapter seven is up!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 5: Confusion

Sophie Snow is quite mysterious, I wonder what's going to happen. Love the story, by the way.

Author's Response: I like the word mistery, adds a nice effect. Thank you!

Defying Gravity by Lilypudding

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When Lily signs up for private flying lessons, she expects to be taught by her best friend. Instead, she gets assigned James Potter as her private instructor. Can they stop arguing for an hour so Lily can learn how to fly? Everyone deserves a chance to fly, but can Lily conquer her fear of heights and learn how to soar? Most importantly, can she learn how to love the man she least expected to? One-shot songfic to "Defying Gravity" from Wicked

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Flying Lessons

I like it. It's cute how you made their first kiss.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review!

Why Do I Love You? by thepatronus_n_thecharm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: We know James fell for Lily, but why? Lily doesn't want to know either. But she has to know. Join the Marauders and Lily's friends in a series of events that begins the ups and downs of loathing, loving, and life.

--Please leave your favorite quote when you review--

Hey, should I keep this story going? I'm thinking of doing a series of one shots. Review and vote yes or no to keep this story alive. Thanks!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 4: I Knew You Would Respond

I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Somewhere by Lilypudding

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily and James Potter live in a world of fear. There is no laughter and no joy. As death knocks at their door, can they convince themselves they belong together and will be together eternally? Or will they die in lonliness and fear? Songfic to "Somewhere" from West Side Story.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: There's A Place For Us...

Oh my gosh thats so sad. Beautiful though

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It\'s appreciated!

Not Another Teen Love Story by 365 letters_ryan gosling 20

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is not your typical love story. It begins in the summer before James' and Lily's seventh year. Lily gets a letter from Remus about Dumbledore's surprising choice for Head Boy. Is Lily happy about this choice? Will James finally win Lily over in the last year that he has left? Read to find out more!

Last chapter in queue!!!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/10/06 Title: Chapter 10: Hogsmeade

I love that Rascal Flatts song, I love that you put it in there. Great update!

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 11: Peter's Back...Or Is He?

love it

By the Light of the Moon by marauders_girl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a fic featuring the beloved Marauders. In this story, we meet a cousin of Sirius's, see some old friends, meet some new ones, and catch a glimpse of the developing romance between Prongsie and dear Lily.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 2: Enter Lily...

I like the reference to tennis :D
I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Why thank you very much! I plan on updating as soon as I can. Thanks again for the review!

Let It Be by sirius_star

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James loved Lily the minute he set eyes on her, way back in their first year. Now in their seventh year at Hogwarts, they are forced to work together as Head Boy and Girl. as their duties bring them closer together, James tries his last method of winning her heart

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 2: Finite Incantatem

I love this story, great prank by the Marauders!

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Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/10/06 Title: None

cute.

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.

Categories: James/Lily
Characters: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 20 | Completed: Yes | Words: 38506 | Hits: 103198 | Published: 05/19/06 | Updated: 11/20/07
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Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 2: Dates, Drama, and Dresses

Love the dress shopping...

I'll Cover You by Lilypudding

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter are excited about their wedding day. It’s their one chance to prove that love can overcome the cruel darkness of the terrible Wizarding war they are fighting. However, both bride and groom are feeling pre-wedding jitters. Can they conquer their nervousness and make it to the altar? Songfic to the amazing song “I’ll Cover You” from RENT.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Again, I love this one too. Funny that you put the guy at Dumbledore's funeral at the wedding.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. He wasn\'t supposed to be a major plot detail, but he sort of ran away and I liked where he was going so I didn\'t try to stop him. I wasn\'t sure my readers would like him though!

First Kiss by PadfootBaby

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James Potter had always secretly loved Lily Evans, from the very first day he met her. But she has shown him nothing on her part but contempt. She calls him arrogant, cruel... Then one night everything changes. James asks Lily to go with him to the Yule Ball at Hogwarts, and to the surprise of both — she accepts, telling him, "Not that this is anything permanent." But the magic of Christmas Eve brings with it a few surprises of its own...

This fic shows what brought these two very different people together, who built a life with each other and who, in the end, unknowingly helped determine the fate of the entire Wizarding world.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Invitation

Love it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

If Tomorrow Never Comes by totally obsessed

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily were known for giving their lives for their only son. That night, the night that Voldemort came and ended their lives, they talked about their possible future. And their love endured even unto death. ONE-SHOT based off of Garth Brook's song, If Tomorrow Never Comes.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: If Tomorrow Never Comes

Beautiful.

Author's Response: thanks.

Lily's Love by PurpleLily

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans meets her new best friends on the train ride to Hogwarts. She also meets James Potter.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: James Crazy

Thats a great twist on things. I love that Lily's in love with James instead of vice versa.

Author's Response: Thanks, it just came to mind reading about all those stories that James always likes lily first and i thought i\'d do something different

A Wink Can Tell It All by HPLoverForever

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans always had felt a strong wave loathing toward James Potter whenever she saw his face. However, one night when Lily is walking along the great halls of Hogwarts, she stumbles upon James doing a wonderful deed for a small first year girl, causing Lily to look at him in a whole different light. What will happen in the end? Read and find out.

Reviewer: MrGibenz Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Difference

cute

Author's Response: :)

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