07/05/05
Welcome! This is my author bio. Obviously. If you couldn't figure that out...you're probably not a Ravenclaw.
Review! If you review me I will (probably) review you, if you've written anything anyway.
News: Blaise 7 is up.
And a new story is in queue, a one-shot that was actually written a long time ago. Tell me what you think of it.
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Date: 12/18/05 Title: None
How can you leave off after a cliffhanger like that!?!?! I'm not going to fanfiction.net again, I tried it and since ppl can put up whatever stories they want, they don't care about basic things like spelling or sentences that make sense anymore. Your story is great- resubmit it, get it up on mugglenet! I want to see what happens next! And for a prank, do something to Snape is my suggestion, but I'd rather see more of Lily than more pointless pranks. Also, what's with James now that he suspects somone else is in his place at Hogwarts? Good job with the story so far!
Author's Response: *points to earlier review responses*
Canis Majoris by trinsy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 34: Beautiful
I liked the Harry- Luna parallel in the talk James and Lily had. The ending was really depressing for such a great story, oh well. You did a really good job writing it. Write more!
Author's Response: I assume you mean Sirius and Lily ... but yeah, congratulations, you are officially the first reviewer to have caught that :D (and in case you are wondering, it was intentional ... I had that OotP scene in my mind when I wrote it). Oh, and I know the ending was depressing, but that's how things worked out *shrugs hopelessly*... Anyway, thanks for the review!
Excerpts from Nagini's Diary by Scheherazade
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A look into the life of Voldy's pet snake, Nagini.
Date: 01/17/06 Title: Chapter 2: Say It Ain't So!?
oh, wow! This is great! I love how you gave Nagini a real personality! Torturing Wormtail for exercise and doing nasty things in DE masks... not to mention keeping a diary. I love the line about how its not like anybody will post this for everyone to read... I never thought an evil snake could be so funny! (not if youre Wormtail though) Great story! 10!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I just submitted chapter 3, so it should hopefully be up soon. :-) I've always imagined Nagini to have a bit of a sarcastic side to her, that's how I came up with this whole story.
Thansk for R&Ring and the 10!
A Road of Shattered Glass by Ennalee
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Three years after Voldemort’s first fall, Tonks and Ninette, a metamorphmagus and a dancer, each struggle to find their own identities apart from the deceptions of mirrors. Meanwhile, in the caves underneath Hogwarts, someone may be searching for things better left lost.
Date: 04/22/07 Title: Chapter 9: The Mysterious Miss Rosier
Wow, Tonks is getting teenagerish. Serious lack of self-esteem- you were very convincing. I'm so glad you're updating! And I really want to see what happens when Charlie and Kevin find out about the Metamorphmagi thing. What pranks can you get away with like that? Anyway, this chapter was quite good, if angsty.
Date: 03/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Mirror
HI, I've had your story on my favorites list for ages. I really want to see an update very soon. You write very well, and I want to see what you are planning with Tonks and Ninette. Consider this a subtle hint: Write more! Please?
Author's Response: Thank you! I will write more, though it has been a huge delay!
Date: 10/14/05 Title: Chapter 6: Dreams of Spun Sugar
Can you update soon? I really like your story. Is Ninette going to get friends soon? She had better! Maybe an incident like the troll in Sorceror's Stone.
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can - I'm hoping (the key word is hoping, unfortunately) to get chapter seven ironed out this weekend, and to post it sometime next week. I'm not making any promises, though. As for Ninette getting friends and how, you'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can - I'm hoping (the key word is hoping, unfortunately) to get chapter seven ironed out this weekend, and to post it sometime next week. I'm not making any promises, though. As for Ninette getting friends and how, you'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Author's Response: Um, two responses? No idea how that happened. Sorry.
Patrick Thatcher and the Colonist's Compass by Dean Thomas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Patrick Thatcher’s older brother teases him, his mother worries about him, and his father defends him. His family sounds very much like any other, but somehow Patrick’s is far from average. In Patrick’s world, adults disappear into thin air, owls deliver mail, and the most popular sport in the country is played on broomsticks. Not to mention that every member of his family is, and always has been, a wizard. When your grandfather is a famous American veteran, being a Thatcher isn’t the easiest life to live. When his acceptance letter to the most prestigious American school of magic arrives addressed to another student, Patrick’s position in his former world begins to take a tumble—right along with the newly elected President of Magic’s approval ratings. With the Wizarding world’s eyes shifting toward a new wizard, can Patrick figure out just why his first year is off to a rocky start? Inspired by J.K. Rowling’s wondrous Harry Potter Series, Patrick Thatcher’s adventures of wizardry in the United States is a tale all its own while still respecting its English origins. Readers are sure to find that the magic across the pond is just as unforgettable.
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Quaffle Quandary
Nice story! Very well written except for some typos. I like how you created the American world of magic, and how its different but has some things in common with England. Patrick is a great character! The plot is very interesting. I enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work and update soon!
The Pawn by ReeraTheRed
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Was Dumbledore stupid to trust Snape? (HALF BLOOD PRINCE COMPLIANT)
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Pawn
This is what all fanfiction should be like. Honestly, I thought it was nearly worthy of JKR. I hope this is how she planned it because now I am probably going to think about Book 7 according to this idea. This is the best Snape- theory I've seen, and it only works as a really well-done fanfic, not an editorial really. And it could be true, and Snape could have gone back to Voldemort later by Book 6, which explains what he did there. Though I haven't read chapter two yet, so maybe not. By the way, I never reviewed without reading the whole story b4, but this was so excellent I decided to. Also, the next chapter has a higher rating so i'm not sure if I want to read it. I might start, but I won't read all of it if it is too disturbing. Anyhow, very good job. 10.
The Salem Witch Trials by FullofLife
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione are spending a day in the small wizarding village of Hogsmeade when they happen to come upon a strange amulet lying in the snow. This amulet has amazing powers and transports the three friends to Salem, Massachusetts in the year 1692 when Muggles lived in fear of witches and wizards and the penalty for being able to perform magic was death.
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 16: February 14th - February 15th 1692
I read this story a while ago, but I don't think I reviewed. (log-in problems, hopefully better now.) I recently read the Crucible, so it was very interesting to see Salem mixed with Harry. Rebecca Nurse was an old lady, btw. I am very curious to see where you are going with all these clues. You write excellent cliffies.
Catching Fireflies by Nyruserra
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: She supposed that she had never really thought about it much before that day – the day she saw him again, standing in the rain outside her door dripping and gorgeous, like a vision out of a hazy past.
One-shot, OW/HG, Not (necessarily) HBP compliant
Date: 04/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Catching Fireflies
Very cute story- one-shot, I suppose? Pretty good character developement for something so short. I cant imagine canon Hermione reading romance novels, but you explained it fairly well. I like your post-war scenario, it just fit this fic perfectly- of LV dying but the DEs still around, etc. Just, one spelling error rather bothered me- "She was mortified when her decent" Descent, I think you meant. Anywise, well done.
After the Die is Cast by Mudblood428
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Since the tragedy at the Astronomy Tower, Harry has become an even more formidable wizard, but a shocking revelation may mean the difference between life and death for The Boy Who Lived. It is the final stage of Harry's quest to destroy Lord Voldemort - can he save the Wizarding World and those he loves from the treachery of the Dark Lord... and also save himself? [Action takes place in media res towards the end of Harry's Seventh Year at Hogwarts (Post-HBP).]
Date: 06/21/06 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Two Serpents
wow. I finally read this, and though it made me stay up way too late, it was very good. In the earlier chapters you have a bunch of places where you use a word just a bit strangely, like you used the thesaurus too much without getting the right shade of meaning. If you want to go back and edit that... This chapter, though it got much better. I loved how you incorporated so many theories and explained weird clues from the books. Harry isnt really dead, is he? Hang on- if you put up a character death warning for a minor character like padma, Harry cant really be dead if you didnt put up a warning! Then again, Voldemort dies too, but no one cares about his death as much as Harry's, right? am I thinking wishfully or is there a surprise in store at the beginning of 12? Please, please, update! Good job on this chapter!
Date: 05/13/06 Title: None
This is really funny so far! I'm laughing out loud. Hermione's fish, Voldie's pinball machine...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the positive feedback!
Date: 10/21/05 Title: None
Wow! I think it's great! There are a bunch of typos though- Ginny is Ginevra, not Ginnervra, and in chapter one, starred and bare aren't right. I love how you are doing book 7, you really have the emotions Harry feels about his life now exactly the way I imagined. Keep it up!
Date: 11/01/05 Title: None
Wow, thanks for updating! You've really got all of the emotions Harry and Ginny and everyone have so true to character, and the dream was really cool and symbolic.
Transformations by Starmaiden
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Remus Lupin, resident werewolf of the Order of the Phoenix, meets Nymphadora Tonks, newly instated Metamorphamagus. Follow them through friendship to their ensuing relationship, which persists in attempting to happen, despite their best efforts. If it does, will they be ready?
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Point of View
Confusion...this is the same chapter as chapter five. PLease fix!!!! otherwise i like this story so far but that was a very disconcerting feeling.
Author's Response: Oops! I was editing and I must have copy/pasted the wrong one. Thanks so much for pointing that out!
Author's Response: Apparently, I accidentally replaced Chapter 5 with the text of Chapter 7. So 7 is right; but you may want to go back and read 5. Thanks again!
Harry Potter and the Seventh Search by snufflesismyidol
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: Harry is getting ready to fight. With trials along the way, Harry will have to make Voldemort mortal before the final battle. Many ships going on in here...
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven - Diagon Alley
The review from Benny- that's my story, he's my brother and I keep telling him not to do that! Sorry! Your story is very good though. The reasons for Harry and Ginny getting back toghether are a lot more plausible than many I've seen. Your story clues are good, but a little obvious. Very well written! I like it, update soon!
Everywhere Else Is Full by saveginny417
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Sure, the tales of the Trio are great, and I'm not denying it. But what happens after the end of their story? Death, deception, and disagreements, to name a few things. Join Cora Potter, along with her best friends Olivia and Drew, during their first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry- and I can guarantee that you will never see the HP universe the same way again.
Chapter eleven is being painfully slow, isn't it? I promise to have it done by the time the queue reopens!
Date: 05/15/06 Title: Chapter 6: Quidditch for the Ages
Really really interesting. i love the characters and the plot. Cora has just the right character for a Potter. Are you going to say how Harry defeated Voldemort? And I'm curious as to what powers Olivia seems to have, that accident was suspicious. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yay a new reviewer! Thanks so much! the answers to most of your questions will surface soon... around chapter 8 or 9! Thanks again!
Date: 06/12/06 Title: None
Hey, you updated! I'm so glad! This is a really good chapter, too.
Date: 12/04/05 Title: None
I just realized that you are on my favorites list but I haven't reviewed. I thought I did, but apparently I forgot. Your story is really good, the plot makes sense and it is really funny and at the same time sad. I like how Neville stays in character and yet is more important and decisive than he usually is in the books. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and putting me on your favorites list. Neville is one of my favorite characters, so I hope I am doing him justice. :) I will be updating before Christmas, (hopefully several chapters)but it may be a week or two. Thanks for putting up with the wait.
Date: 05/21/06 Title: None
Are you updating ever? I like your story and I want to find out what happens, but I've been waiting for ages....
Author's Response: I am updating again somtime soon. I had a huge (think hundreds of pages) document to complete and polish by the end of May. It\'s finished, so an update should be forthcoming in the next week or two. So sorry to keep you waiting.