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08/03/07

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Where Our Kind Belong by FlightofthePhoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Leah Reeves is adopted. She lives in London with her adoptive parents Matthew and Margaret Reeves. She has everything a girl could wish for. A wardrobe of expensive clothes, a place at the London Institute for Young Girls, money to go shopping whenever, for anything she wants. And she hates it. She can’t seem to get her parents’ attention; they’re too caught up in their busy lives. But when a letter and a strange man arrives and tells her that she is a witch and that she can go to a school to learn magic, will her parents decide to give her what she wants in life?

An entry to the Autumn challenge ‘New Beginnings’ prompt by FlightofthePhoenix, a proud Hufflepuff

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 12/30/07 Title: Chapter 2: I'm a What?

Great story. Leah's parents do seem a bit mean, but they don't know how to be parents. They love her.

Update soon!

The Time Turner's Curse by mattyjam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione is fourteen going on fourteen hundred, which means she wasn't able to break the curse. Now she would have to live her life all over again.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Words: 4725 | Hits: 2725 | Published: 10/23/07 | Updated: 10/24/07
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Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 10/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Oh my god. That was amazing! And, it is actually possible that that could of happened. Unlikely, but possible. Wow.

Author's Response: Unlikely, but yes possible. It is amazing how little decisions in life can have dire consequences. We never know what sets on the path we currently walk, or what could have potentially sent us from it. Glad you enjoyed it!

The Guardian by Merlynne

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Before James, before Hogwarts, before Lily could have ever imagined she was a witch, there was Severus Snape; the neighbourhood oddity.

Winner the November 2007 One-Shot Challenge: Young Love

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done! I love the idea of sev being so... awkward. Keep Updating!

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just realised that this is a one shot. Oopps! I still think you should add more...

Author's Response: Oh, I\'ve considered it. We\'ll see...I am in love with this ship all of a sudden. Thanks for the reviews!

blink-blink by Stubbornly_appeared

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "blink-blink
wake up, australia
breath..."

Monica Wilkins begins a letter to someone that doesn't exist with an invisible war on the television.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 12/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: blink-blink

Wow. That is so good. You are a master.

I just came across this again (because you gave me a review! Thankyou!) and i realised that i never left a reveiw the first time.

I just want to say that after reading this REALLY REALLY COOL AWESOME poem, that it inspired me to actually write some poems. They are not anywhere as good as yours, though. You rock.

Author's Response: Gzasp. ZOMG. Was I just called a master? Pinch me, I must be dreaming. THANK YOU! Totally going to go read your poems.... -Stubby

Werewolf Among Wizards by shewolf2000

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Glimpses into Remus Lupin's life at Hogwarts, all trying to answer the question: Is Remus a normal wizard who just has a â€œfurry little problemâ€, or is he a werewolf among wizards, trying to fit in where he may never truly belong?

Now with more Snape down the Whomping Willow! Check out Chapter 10: A Highly Amusing Joke and Chapter 11: Skyfall

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: His Worst Fear

That was great! You wrote a really good story, but it was the little things you put in that made it so good. Great job for a first story.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your lovely review!

Episkey by Elmindreda

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A quiet evening is about to turn considerably less so, as Severus Snape has a visitor he could not pretend to have not expected, and would never admit to have dreaded...

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Sectumsempra

I didn't work! But Cissy is so gullible... is she the only death eater who has a good side?

Author's Response: Thank you for R/R. Not quite sure what \'didn\'t work\', though.

As for Cissy, I\'m not sure if she is a DE at all, have we ever heard of her having the Mark? Gullible? Not necessarily. But willing to go to certain lengths to protect her son, especially now that their family has definitely fallen out of favor.

A Weasley Christmas by PadfootnPeeves

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Based on the famous 'Twas the night before Christmas' with a Weasley twist, and told from Ron's POV.
No DH Spoilers!

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 12/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Weasley Christmas

Ha! Good job. Some re-adapted poems don't rhyme, or rhyme really badly, but your's was really well done. Get some more up soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The idea just sort of popped into my mind, since I had wanted to do a Christmas-y story. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The idea just sort of popped into my mind, since I had wanted to do a Christmas-y story. Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Oh, and you\'re my first EVER reviewer! Congrats! ^_^

Thursday's Child by Sirenny

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: They were here. She had known they were coming, and the prospect had allowed a tickle of annoyance to prickle at the back of her mind in the days since the news, but now they were here and Petunia had never before felt so angry, had never before felt such a hot coil of fury that sat heavily in the pit of her stomach and blazed behind her eyes.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: Thursday's Child

Great Job! Exactly how i see Petunia at this time- she has convinced herself that magic is worthless, but she is still jealous.

I don't think the poem is right, though. I am Thursday's child and i am not full of grace.

Well Done!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I am very glad you liked Petunia, as this was my first real time writing her. Oh, Thursday\'s child had far to go...you are thinking of Tuesday =P

Fighting Otter by voldiegirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione is being tortured into speaking in the Malfoy Manor during Deathly Hallows. Hermione's pep talk to herself not to give away her best friend's secrets.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short and sweet. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

The Doe In Severus by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily is getting married to James Potter tomorrow. Severus knows he only has one more chance to reach her before she's gone for good.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Doe In Severus

I have read a lot of severusatlilyswedding fics, but this is the best. She hates him. No one else seems to get that.

Good job!

Author's Response: I don\'t know if Lily \"hates\" Severus, but she certainly doesn\'t like at all who he\'s become. Thanks for reviewing!

Tears of Lamis by dracoslamis

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The summer couldn’t have changed her more; from being known as ‘Looney Lovegood’ she had become a creature of the night.

“…a subtle change came over her, clear blue eyes narrowed into dark slits and two white points appeared over the edge of her full bottom lip…”

Sent back to be rejected, merely so she would willingly return to her own kind; to become another pawn in this Dark March against the Light. He came to her rescue, a Black Knight for the Dark side, the side she was meant to be turning to. But is that truly him, or is it a façade behind which a White Knight waits to be awakened.

WARNINGS: Some OoC behaviour in Luna’s character due to her… situation and some AU.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue; Temptation

Well, you've got me hooked. There's not enough stories on mugglenet about vampires; and Luna is perfect. Who would suspect her?

Keep updating!

Author's Response: thank you for your review =D thats exactly what i thought about vampires on mnff, they are very under represented. The next chapter is being betaed, and should be up soon! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx dracoslamis

Author's Response: thank you for your review =D thats exactly what i thought about vampires on mnff, they are very under represented. The next chapter is being betaed, and should be up soon! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx dracoslamis

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 05/25/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Keeping the Faith

Just wanted to leave a review saying thankyou for updating so fast! An always enjoyable story- with a new chapter at least once, if not thrice, a week. Keep updating!

Author's Response: I kept writing while Mugglenet was having all its site problems, so I have quite a few chapters in reserve. They\'ve been doing a great job of validating new chapters lately. Let\'s hope they keep it up!

Angela by Phia Phoenix

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Written around the lyrics to Angela by Missy Higgins, this one-shot explores a few "what if" questions: what if the places were reversed and it was Lily whose feelings for James were unrequited, what if Sirius had a sister and what if she happened to be Hogwart's very own Mean Girl? Well, if you feel like some light reading, try this story!

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Angela

That was great! And particually how you didn't change everything around. Some reverse stories have Lily having four fiends, one of whom is a werewolf. But your Lily is stilll... Lily.

Author's Response: Ooh, I haven\'t seen any with Lily\'s werewolf friend, that might be worth looking into. Yeah, I wanted it AU but not so AU that you couldn\'t relate it to the real books, you know? Thanks for the review!

The Righteous and The Wicked by untitlednine

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Sirius has been best friends with Bree since their first year. And when he feels as though she means a little more than that, he does all he can to deny it.

That is, until certain events unfold which make denial impossible.

Now, he not only has to worry about getting the girl, but getting the girl to see he is more than an inconsiderate prat, and still worth having as a friend.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Because Poking Someone in the Eye is NOT a Safe Practice

Hey,
Just read over this again- it's great- and wondering when (if? please not if) you are going to update?

Author's Response: I honestly have no idea, but thanks :D

Statues, Safes, Painted Walls and Streetlights by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Two thousand feet walk under the streetlights as a thousand lives forget a million footsteps and turn their backs on a hundred ways to say, 'I cared.'

Sirius runs away from home, taking with him one solitary memory...

Winner of the 2008 QSQ for Best Marauder-Era one-shot!

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 03/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Job! The style is really good. Will there be more? Please say yes!

Author's Response: Nope, sorry, this is a one-shot. But I\'ll certainly write more on the same topic. I love exploring the Black brothers.

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Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 03/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice. Severus is one of my favorite charecters- probably because i feel guilty about beliving he was evil. You did a great job of such a hard charecter. Great job and keep writing!

Returning from the Shadows by megan_lupin

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Terror, panic, and confusion made up the First War. The Dark Lord and his Death Eaters kept the Wizarding World in a state of darkness and war for over a decade.

But what if Hallowe'en of 1981 hadn't ended it, and the war had continued for years? What if things had happened differently and a family's lives were saved?

(An AU, First War story)

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Words: 10296 | Hits: 1354 | Published: 03/31/08 | Updated: 07/22/08
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Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Reflection and Remembrance

Really well done- an interesting AU view. Keep writting!

Author's Response: Thanks, lilyevans489. Glad to hear you\'re enjoying it, and the new chapter should be up soon.

~Megan

Sunday Breezes by Crows

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Because sometimes we just have to communicate.

A gift to my favorite ship.

I am Crows of Slytherin House and this is my submission for Air

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah. Who dosn't love silver?

You have a greet grasp of the Hermione/Ron relationship, which i know from experience is very hard to write properly. It's nice to hear about hermione and ron living in (semi) harmony.

Great job and keep writting!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried quite hard to get them just right. It was worth it.

Vanity and Pride by Ironic Inspiration

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:

What is a story without a scandal?

Underneath every burn hole on the tapestry of the Black family tree, there is a story, and underneath every story, there is a scandal.

In 1924, the Blacks were the most powerful family of the Wizarding World. They were greedy, back-stabbing, malicious, and power-hungry. And Cedrella was no exception. She was her father's favourite daughter; the pride of the Blacks, and it has earned her a conceited nature like no other.

But during her seventh year at Hogwarts, her life begins to become a little more clear, her family a little more conniving. She is arranged to wed the infamous Abraxus Malfoy and has people watching her every move to make sure she follows through. It makes it even more difficult when Septimus Weasley, a blood traitor and fellow classmate, starts to convince her, that for once in her life, she could have what she wanted.

A scandal forms between the two; a forbidden love between Black and Weasley behind the walls of Hogwarts. If they are found out, their lives will be ruined. But even under the opposition, what a Black wants...

a Black gets.

Reviewer: lilyevans489 Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black

Great idea- it has always interested me how various members of the Black family were disgraced. Looking forwards to more chapters!

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